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CwboyAtHeart
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since 2001-04-14
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Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-07-02 07:25 PM


MY 100'th POST!  FINALLY!  lol  Okay.  It's the summer, and I do like nothing during the summer.  Very few of my friends even talk to me during the summer or anything...  So that's what this is about.  


BORING SUMMER

I just sit on my computer
Watching music videos on CMT
Lila McCann seems to get cuter
I continue to live carefree

Nobody ever gives me a call
No, I don't think my phone will ring
I just converse wih a wall
As Toby Keith continues to sing

Summer is so boring, I think
I sit online and talk to a friend
All she wants is a webpage link
This boring summer will never end

Hey, look, it's my friend from school
Oh, he's only playing a game
My life is just no longer cool
I have no life, what a shame

My friends always tell me
That we shoud hang out sometime
Nothing to do,what could it be?
I just stay here and contine to rhyme

I wish someone was home
To drive me sometime to town
That way me and some friends could roam
Dance like a fool,look like a clown

But there's nothing to do
So I'll go hang out in pip
Hope I don't step in Javier's poo...
This is my hundredth post, aint that hip?

(Sorry, hip rhymed with pip, nothing else fit)




      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 07-04-2001).]

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angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12
Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH
1 posted 2001-07-02 08:35 PM


This is cute, my summer is boring to, so I know how you feel. lol

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
2 posted 2001-07-02 09:36 PM


I'm the complete opposite. I count down the days till summer so I can get a break from my friends. So I can just sit around the house day after day. (Boring at times- but I still love it.) And someone hide this post form Javier so he doesn't get a bigger head!   Okay-Seriously now... I liked this. The rhyming was nice. It gave it a beat. Great write here. Keep posting.  
CwboyAtHeart
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Selah, WA, USA
3 posted 2001-07-02 09:50 PM


  <~~~  I still think that looks like a smiley winking at you as it gets ready to sit on the pot...  ::shrugs::  Oh well.  

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

anonymous albert ?
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4 posted 2001-07-02 10:48 PM


welcome to the three digits!!!...and this was nice esp the javi part ...enjoyed the read...but to me..everyday is dole...yet not really to me considered boring...anyways...bye Cody

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-02-2001).]

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5 posted 2001-07-02 11:18 PM


Aw, I know EXACTLY how this feels!  I am the exact same way.  My brother goes out and has a blast, and always sees me sitting at the computer.  He's been telling me for 3 weeks now "I have no life."  Haha.. I liked the lines, "I just converse wih a wall/As Toby Keith continues to sing."  That was cute.. Nice work, and congrats on 100!!  Hehe.  Hope to see more.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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6 posted 2001-07-03 07:49 PM


Yea spice, I love it when people talk about my poo haha. My head just inflates with cockiness.

And hey, do I just randomly poo in pip? haha

Nice poem here Cody, Happy 100th post!!
Just one more 0 man!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

anonymousfemale
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Posts 2797
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7 posted 2001-07-04 08:58 AM


Congratulations on the 100th post, Cody.   It's always good to get into the triple digits. When you get to the 1000th, then you know you have been contributing around here.
Summer is the best time of the year! The beaches! The guys!! Ahh...the fun one girl can have...*sighs*
Ahem...Anyway, just one qualm with your piece. The meter was all out. Maybe a revision of it could improve it just a tad.

~AF~

Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that.
~ Oscar Wilde ~

Spice
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Resting in my cardboard box.
8 posted 2001-07-04 05:40 PM


LMAO..Thanks alot! I'll never be able to look at --->   <--- the same again.

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9 posted 2001-07-08 06:29 PM


Congratulations on your 100th post.  hey, you can call to ya know    Don't tell me you dont have even 1 friend.  Sometimes we have to do somthing and not just sit and wait.  Thanks for the share

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

TunaKaHuna
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since 2001-06-28
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10 posted 2001-07-08 07:48 PM


Congrats on 100th posts...I am wondering when i will get there as well. Nice poem, but I am there with Spice, I just needed to get away from my friends, that I was the most excited person for summer to be here. But PEOPLE! I still go with my motto-

"summer is as fun as YOU make it"
  
   and this is something I am living up to very well. But really, it doesnt matter what you do as long as you are having a good time. Even watching the paint peel....

Good poem, the flow was great, and I had to laugh a little at the rhymes, keep it up, and dont worry, school will be here soon *shrill*

--Brenton

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