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Losing My Hope
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Losing My Hope |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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Please, dont speak to me that way Cant you see you're tearing me apart? Do you really mean that it was just a game? Do you know how you've hurt me? And you don't even care... ..Oh no, you didn't want to see.. ..Oh no, you didn't want to understand.. ..Oh no, you didn't want it to be.. I must have been blind To belive what you said I must have been a fool To think that you loved me I thougth you meant it.. I thougth you'd wait for me.. Im such a fool.. why didn't I see? I was naive And in love Living in a world of dreams Maybe I should thank you for throwing me back To Reality You made me cry Made me hurt Made me hate you ..crushed me.. So, what was I, you're sacrifice? A numer on you're list? Number six, or was it maybe? The ones you only sometimes call? Did you expext me to accept it? Of course I couldn't.. I was in love.. I wanted you..You, alone.. Wanted you to be only mine. ..You were never worth it. No, you were certainly never worth it. And now, what are you doing..? kissing and hugging her? Makes the same promises you once made to me? I hope she leaves you, I hope she hurts you, I hope she kick you out in the dark! ..Do you still remember all the things you promised me? You were the one who insisted on us.. Told me that we could work it out, that we'd find a way.. I don't see why you were doing it. When I started to love you, you just left me for someone else and pretended that nothing has happend... That we never were more than friends. but you know, that's not the truth.. What have I done to deserve this? Always,when I love my life and the sun is shining.. suddenly the sky is all dark and the world is trembling. I thougth you were different.. I thougth we had a future.. You seemd so sure. But I was wrong. Again, I was wrong. My love always turn out to be sorrow.. I cant understand Cant get used to it Its always this bad..Hitting the wall.. All this crying and pain..All this heartache.. Will I ever find someone who's rigth? I thougth you were the one..I loved you.. And now Im down again, losing my hope.. Does it always ends up like this? Is this the way it is? *-* So, Im hurt again..*sigh*  well, I guess I'll get over it..maybe not very soon, but..And, Thanks For Reading.  *-* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Oh Zarina I'm sorry! *Hugs* Heartbreak is horrible... The 5th Stanza reminded me of a poem I wrote. Specifically the revenge part. Wishing and hoping the girl would give the guy as much pain as you had to endure. And the 6th stanza I could really relate to. I loved this Zarina. It was a great write. I'm sorry you have to go through all this to write it though. You are wonderful writer. I'll be waiting for your next post.  |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i really liked this piece...this was just..wonderful ...your emotions were so sincere yet expressed so well...i enjoyed this one aLOT and im glad that you are trying to be positive about this...i wish you the best...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aw, Carina... I'm very sorry. Heartbreak is quite possibly the worst pain there is. Love is one of the hardest things to get over... you have youth on your side, though So there will be another. I know it hurts to think that right now, but there will be a true prince charming that will come and sweep you off your feet. I'm sorry that you were hurt again... time will heal your broken heart. Until then, keep your head up, and stay strong I really enjoyed this poem. Keep posting all of your work.--Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Thanks for responding.. yes, with time this will heal.. It's just that I thougth that this time it was something.. And he seemed to think so too.. And then,now, I don't understand why he.. Ohwell. Im sure you see what Im into. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one. I could relate to it.....cept I was on the other side of it *sigh*. Anyhow, nicely done here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Alysia182 Junior Member
since 2001-06-22
Posts 19CT |
Aww...this is a hard thing to deal with. I just went though getting my heart broken also. I hope you feel better and find the right person. Oh, the poem was really good!! Alysia |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
aww geez this must be heartbreak week at Pip. im so sorry for the recent events. boys just plain suck sometimes. but everytime you hurt you grow so much you dont even know. so in some twisted way you can thank him for helping you grow and shaping your character just trying to be the optimist! keep posting no matter what*dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Yea, I know. I've already replied... But I keep coming back and reading this one... So I've decided I want it in my library. Again, Excellent write here. |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
Thanks again. I'm sure I'll be okey..I just need some time.. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I just hope you're better by now. *hugs* Stay strong Zarina hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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