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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

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In a dream world

0 posted 2001-07-02 12:27 PM

His words so sweet
His love so true
There could never be
Another quite like you

You inspire me to write
You inspire me to sing
While in Heaven above me
All the bells ring

One ring for joy
A second for song
A third for love
It lasts all night long

The angels above us rejoice
My heart skips a beat
When I hear the words 'I love you'
I no longer feel my feet

I look at the stars
Shining in the night sky
I now know the reason
Why I am alive

You are my muse
And the one I love
The one my heart
Will forever think of
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Not my best work...but I'm trying to write through writer's block!! so pls don't tell me that it's not my best...lol.

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
-->Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

1 posted 2001-07-02 01:26 PM

Very pretty piece. Don't try so hard to rhyme. Relax it will come

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-07-02 05:30 PM

Awww Stace.
Writer's block? I don't see it.
I thought this was very nicely written.
Such a sweet poem.
Your "muse" will love it.

angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

3 posted 2001-07-02 05:59 PM

Stace, I told you it was good! But no, you don't wanna believe me... lol

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

Jenn Cirrincione

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Fl

4 posted 2001-07-02 06:49 PM

Very cute. I agree the *muse* will love this.

Jenn

"Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

5 posted 2001-07-02 08:17 PM

thanks guys, but my *muse* is leaving me...well, pip, not me, lol. but he's still leaving...

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
-->Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.
*~!~*

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-07-02 10:59 PM

AHH! Damned writer's block... hehe. This is a very good poem for being on writer's block. I especially liked the third stanza about the bells. THis is very sweet... I enjoyed this! Nice work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

7 posted 2001-07-02 11:32 PM

how sweet Stace

...you expressed the feeling of love very nicely...and it was cute..

...hahaha...keep writin.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 07-02-2001).]

Skyfire

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Riding

8 posted 2001-07-02 11:52 PM

Very nicely done! I didn't see any writer's block, and that's the honest truth! Good write!

Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

Marshalzu

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Lurking

9 posted 2001-07-03 02:41 PM

Great work Stace, I absoloutely adore this

The Muse.

branden726

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since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

10 posted 2001-07-03 02:44 PM

If this is a writers block then i wouldnt mind seeing a poem of some sort when you get through it great work Stace first time ive seen some of your work.

Elvenblood
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since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

11 posted 2001-07-03 03:25 PM

That's very sweet! I'm gonna send that to someone, thanks for writing it. Thank you so much! I love the words, but a line or so is a little ong in comparison to the rest, but it doesn't matter really. Love it!

No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

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12 posted 2001-07-03 03:27 PM

I really enjoyed this. Writers block stinks huh? Well, it seems you will recover very quickly, b/c this is an excellent poem.

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

13 posted 2001-07-03 06:24 PM

Well done here Stacy, I really liked this one a lot. I haven't notice a decay in your writing nor have I realized you lost yer muse. I have lost mine seeing as how I haven't written anything in almost a month.
Anyhow, well done here. I enjoyed this.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

14 posted 2001-07-04 09:43 PM

Stace, if you call this writer's block, I can't wait to see more work when you don't have it. I belive this is really good, and I can't see why you don't personally like it. You did an awesome jon on this one, keep it up.

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stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

15 posted 2001-07-05 04:15 PM

thanks guys for all the replies!! I truly appreciate it!!!!

!!!!!!!

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
*~!!~*I love Zu!!*~!!~*

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