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and this is what a writer's block sounds like... oh bleh.

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0 posted 07-02-2001 01:57 AM       View Profile for quietlydying   Email quietlydying   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for quietlydying

this has quite possibly got to be the worst piece i have written in a long while.  i'm trying to get over a writer's block right now [and you all know what it's like], if you've noticed that i haven't been around in a while.

sometimes i crave,
i miss,
i NEED that sweetness
of your touch
breath
smell.
i feel
the warmth
of the sound
of your voice
and i forget
everything
that had once
crossed my mind.

i can be too
maguanimous
at times.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen.  - macbeth act 1, scene 3

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1 posted 07-02-2001 07:35 AM       View Profile for the_rescue   Email the_rescue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for the_rescue

i think it's better than what I could do with writers block lol

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

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2 posted 07-02-2001 11:47 AM       View Profile for Heavens Tears   Email Heavens Tears   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Heavens Tears

This is a good piece considering you have writers block.  You put a lot of emotion into this poem.  Great job!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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3 posted 07-02-2001 12:56 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

If this is writers block then I can't wait to see verse that isn't from you!
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4 posted 07-02-2001 06:56 PM       View Profile for Jenn Cirrincione   Email Jenn Cirrincione   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn Cirrincione

I echo the others. Even w/ the block it's good.

Jenn

"Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody

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I liked it, thought you did very well concidering.  

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If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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6 posted 07-02-2001 11:02 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

This is very good!  Wow, everyone seems to be on writer's block right now.  I really liked the last three lines... you did a nice job.  I haven't seen you around here much, but I personally find that muse often shows itself during my writer's block when I read lots of other's work, and critique other's poetry.  Maybe that'll help... best of luck with that   Keep posting all your work... I look forward to seeing more from you.

--Marie

You canít expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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im glad to see you post your poems again ...and writers block suks..eh? ...but great job!...the emotions were nice in this one...i enjoyed it...bye

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8 posted 07-03-2001 01:08 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

I think "writers' block" is contagious right now. And yet everyone who thinks they have it are writing awesome poems. Like this one!!!   Good write. don't let the evil writers' block stop you from writing!!

Rhonda  

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

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9 posted 07-03-2001 08:20 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I really think you should add some sort of punctuation at the end of whenever you stop a sentence or whatever.
Besides that I thought you wrote the poem wonderfully. I liked it a lot.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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10 posted 07-06-2001 11:57 AM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

I enjoyed the read.  I too would like to see some punctuation.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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11 posted 01-31-2003 03:02 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

I wish I had writers block like this, absoloutely magnificent

Andrew
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dude, i wish my poems when i had writers block were this good. lol. i really like your poem... awesome job
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