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Ski*Chick
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since 2001-01-13

Posts 141
Fitchburg, Mass, Usa

0 posted 2001-07-01 08:28 PM

Forever
Is there a forever?
If so my friend and I wouldn’t be graduating
If so we’d still be on the phone or online

Forever we all wish to have but we don’t always get what we want
We always think, “Forever would be so great full”
But forever is in a dream

Minna
July 1, 2001

Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same.

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-07-01 10:06 PM

"But forever is in a dream"

beautiful

...i liked the poem overall...great job!...hope to see more...bye Minna

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-02 12:20 PM

Hmmm... Is there a forever?... I could go on about this

But I won't fill up your thread with all my talk, talk, talk. I really liked this poem. The last line is very powerful, and hit hard! This one really got me thinking. Nice work, Minna. I enjoyed this!

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-02 10:21 PM

Hi Minna. Graduating is tuff. Great write. Keep posting.

[This message has been edited by Spice (edited 07-03-2001).]

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2001-07-03 01:15 AM

"Forever is a dream"
How true, how true. Good write!

Rhonda

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

scout
Member

since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

5 posted 2001-07-03 09:36 AM

I skipped my senior graduation ceremony... but i remember leaving all my friends at my overseas private k-9 school i went to, and that was tough, especially since i had to start at my sophmore year at high school that i realized i didn't know how to make friends....

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-07-03 07:12 PM

I was late for graduation. Anyhow, i know how this one feels. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-07-04 09:45 PM

I believe there is such a thing as forever. And I do believe, based on reading your other poems, your love for your dad will last forever. I know the poem is not about your dad, but I just wanted to bring up a point. Be strong Minna.

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