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stace_co2003
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In a dream world

0 posted 2001-07-01 03:06 PM



August of my freshman year
I was late to my 2nd period class
my mind was filled with fear
I prayed for it to pass

One day I was sick
and I stayed home from school
the insults were really thick
they were all being so cruel

except for you with your long brown hair
your kind eyes and gentle smile
you told me what they said just wasn't fair
I just knew we'd be friends for awhile

Two months of a story book friendship
Then suddenly a rift in our lives
we were ripped apart by betrayal
it stabbed me like thousands of knives

Ten months later we're back on track
we're better friends as a matter-of-fact
Thirteen more months of a story book friendship
we're "bestest friends" forever till the end!


SIDENOTE------>

hey Kris, SKYDIVER!!!!!!!!!!
oh yeah, and the chone is chaking me!!
the choke is chaining me!! heehee

(inside jokes you guys)

-->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile.
-->Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

© Copyright 2001 Stacy Caudill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-01 04:29 PM


Great tribute to your friend.  There were a few places where the flow and meter were off, but the message behind the poem was great!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
to fly like the birds... to be set free.

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2 posted 2001-07-01 10:00 PM


aww...this was sweet...great tribute to kris...i liked the poem..and hope you guys stay that way for a loooong time ...thansk for sharing it...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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3 posted 2001-07-01 11:10 PM


This is so cute, Stace.  
Kris will LOVE it. It's just so nice and a great way to show your friendship.  

~AF~

Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that.
~ Oscar Wilde ~

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4 posted 2001-07-02 12:42 PM


This is SUCH a cute tribute!  I really enjoyed this.. The fact that you two overcame a rift in the friendship that was serious enough to cause a break for a year shows that you two obviously have a close bond.  Cherish that!  Friends are the best... This is so sweet, and I know she appreciates this.  Nice work!

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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5 posted 2001-07-02 06:02 PM


Awww, Stace!!!!! *hugs* thanx sissy!!! We did overcome a lot of bad times, and I'm glad that we are as good of friends as we are!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

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6 posted 2001-07-03 04:00 PM


~*BUMP*~  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

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7 posted 2001-07-03 05:08 PM


Such a sweetie...
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8 posted 2001-07-04 09:41 PM


I'm glad to see you're both going strong as friends.  I think I do have an idea on what caused the stabbing pain  
oh well, great job Stace

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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