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Is This Living?
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Is This Living? |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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Wake up each morning Look in the mirror Wish that I could be perfect Then go on with my day Is this living? Walk past the world Staring athe the ground Not daring to life my glance To the world around me Is this living? Walk by a mirror Feel chills creep up my spine From my fear of looking up For fear of what I'll see Is this living? Walk around every corner With so little confidence As if death will grett me But sometimes, I wish it would Is this living? I hear of all these people Living life to its fullest Then I think about my own And silently wonder Is this living? *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Great job, Amanda! I loved this one...I can relate completely! Living insecure and with no confidence at all is absolutely horrible. Great write here...Keep posting.  |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
I liked your poem. It had very good thoughts to it. Keep writing. ab *~"Sometimes I wish I was a little girl again--because bruised knees heal faster than broken hearts."~* |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
I really like this one. Sometimes people expect too much, and expect certain things from you. It's your life, and it IS living. Your life. - Cody - |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
you just don't know what living is until you are dead. xscoutx |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Another powerful, emotion-filled poem from you. Nice work, Amanda. I really enjoyed this... the flow was excellent, and the ideas are deep, and well written. Good job! --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotional...i liked how you expressed yourself in this one...i related to it a lot...great job!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Amanda, if you think others don't have their own problems, you're totally wrong. we all have to go thru trials in our life, this is what makes us who we are. Be strong. I loved you poem. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
People just pretend to have great lives with no problems and sky-high confidence. Deep question you asked here, and it will keep me thinking for a while. Great write! Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one.....beautiful job here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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