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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Im not sure how to spell it. Ive been away. missed alot of poems, none the less, im back. And I hope you enjoy.wrote while recovedring...so its crap SCALPLE As the needle pierces my skin I lose the feeling in my body the scalple slices open the flesh of below my rib cage the blood oozes as deft fingers pry the incision open I feel pressure no pain Eyes wide open the couldn't put me under without the fear of me dying tears of shock cloud my vision they tell me not to look I'm drawn in as if it was a magnet no more, I want to get up "were almost done, darling" I can't speak my tongue feels as it was swollen and cotton blood runs out of my body "She needs more blood" I'm dying, stupid quacks your suppose to be saveing me is all I can think eyelids close against the piercing light As I wake up the lights shine in my eyes as if they were virgin my hands trail to the bandage and my face contorts in pain "You got to be freaking joking, I'm actually alive?!" Regina can think If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
~ina~ hey welcome back, we all missed ya. i like this poem...i'm guessing it's something that really happened to you?? the end made me laugh aloud, good work. -fear- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Get your wisdom teeth removed...? That's how I felt when it happened, so I was just askin...cool poem here... Jenn "Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, was this how it felt to be in surgery? Are you ok regi? Do tell me...ok? I enjoyed this poem, although it kind of freaked me out thinking that you went through this.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow... this poem blew me away. I really hope you didn't go through this. I hope you're okay! Take care... --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oh WOW!!! This is sooo great, Regina! The imagery was really good. SO good that I got this really horrid taste in my mouth when you were talking about the needles (EJ hates needles with a passion). Very well done.  ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Great work Ina, I really enjoyed the read. Andrew |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
i liked this one, keep posting, especially the part about cotton, reminds me when i got my wisdom teeth pulled out. xscoutx |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Welcome back. This was a great poem to announce your return. You did a wonderful job here, but I really hope that you are OK now. *Amanda* |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
No it wasnt any wisdom teeth. It was hard core surgery in my adomen/intercostal muscles. thanks for the replies. Its good to be back If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite intense Ina...but i really hope you are ok ...and Welcome back!! this was a great coming back poem ...take care...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm not sure what exactly happened to you, but I'm glad you're ok. Very expressive poem Ina. You're talent in writing is wonderful. Thanks for the read, and keep it up. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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87654321 New Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 1 |
sooo thats the surgury you got! *kiss* sorry i had to |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Wow,Ina I hope you are feeling better. I can understand how crazy surgery is, I've been there. Not life threatening, but not a walk in the park either. I am glad to see the "quacks" didn't mess U up (too bad)  Glad to see you back. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur [This message has been edited by keoni (edited 07-18-2001).] |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
wow, I really like this...is this actually what you went through??? I'd have passed out.... I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden. |
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