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little_krazy_poet
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since 2001-05-28

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0 posted 2001-06-25 02:53 AM

I DIE AGAIN
laying on the floor

I DIE AGAIN
staring at the door

I DIE AGAIN
as my sole escapes away

I DIE AGAIN
as my sole decided not to stay

I DIE AGAIN
as she says i don’t want to be

I DIE AGAIN
as she set herself free
last week my best firend, she said that i was her last firend when i was at the hospittle. i wrote this for her as i was waitting for her to wake up. i was the only one there. this is really hard for me

WRITE WHAT YOU FEEL!! AND DON’T LET ANYONE TELL YOU TO DO OTHERWISE

WHEN YOU LIVE, YOU DIE
WHEN YOU DIE, YOUR FORGOTTEN
AND WHEN YOUR FORGOTTEN

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 06-25-2001).]

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

1 posted 2001-06-25 03:28 AM

this poem was nice...but i had to edit some parts of the poem...due to the content of it...hope you understand and consider it next time...and this must be hard...as i hope everything ok

...with your friend...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-06-25 08:30 AM

Great work LKP I really enjoyed the read and I'm sure this is a great tribute for your friend

Andrew

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Member Rara Avis

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Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-06-25 09:24 AM

Just hoping things get better for you. Be strong.

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

Fading Away

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Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-06-25 12:03 PM

Wow.. this poem is very emotional.. very powerful. I'm so sorry that you're going through this right now, but earlier this week, I've been through similar. If you need someone to talk to, don't hesitate to email me. *hug* I hope you feel better.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Heavens Tears

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since 2001-03-15

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5 posted 2001-06-25 12:06 PM

I hope that this situation gets better fast. Even so, just be there for your friend, I'm sure she would do the same for you. Anyway, great poem!

*Amanda*
I need more time to find the real me...
To fly like the birds, to be set free.

[This message has been edited by Heavens Tears (edited 06-25-2001).]

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-06-25 12:29 PM

Great job Krazy.
This was a very emotional piece.
I hope everything gets better.

Stay Strong.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

7 posted 2001-06-25 06:09 PM

touching the heart most completely here.....I feel for you....

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

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Japan

8 posted 2001-06-25 06:12 PM

awww that stinks sorry the poem was good though

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

stace_co2003
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since 2001-03-30

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In a dream world

9 posted 2001-06-25 10:47 PM

I like this poem *hugs* I hope everything gets better soon.

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

10 posted 2001-06-25 10:48 PM

Great poem. I'm sorry you're going through hard *stuff*. If you need to talk let me know.
Bel

FoxXena
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where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

11 posted 2001-06-25 10:53 PM

great message!!

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

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San Juan, Puerto Rico

12 posted 2001-06-26 11:40 PM

I enjoyed this one krazy.

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

13 posted 2001-07-05 08:32 PM

this really was an awesome poem...very emotional, i enjoyed it

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