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0 posted 2001-06-24 08:46 PM


They say every cloud has a silver lining
The darker the cloud the brighter the lining
I've had my cloud, I've found my lining
I can live again without worry
Of the things that will hurt me or the
Things that will kill me
I've found my way out
And I'll never return
Life has not been kind to me
But it's just life
And I'll survive

"Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here*

© Copyright 2001 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-06-24 09:10 PM


The message to this poem is one I think every deserves to hear, Rhonda!  VERY nice work.  That's so very true.  And whatever doesn't kill us makes us stronger, right?  I enjoyed this.  Beautiful work.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

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2 posted 2001-06-24 10:29 PM


.....and that's just it   you will  
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3 posted 2001-06-25 12:10 PM


Skyfire-
   this is great!  
   you've penned a very important
   message here...life isn't always
   kind or fair, but with a positive
   attitude we will all survive..
   wonderful job!!  

   smiles,
   ~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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4 posted 2001-06-25 12:19 PM


great message in this...i liked the way you have written this...great job!...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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5 posted 2001-06-25 09:00 AM


Great work Skyfire a great piece of work and an enjoyable read  
Andrew

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6 posted 2001-06-25 07:28 PM


Be strong...I see you already are.  keep it up

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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7 posted 2001-06-25 10:23 PM


this is really good! I like this!! thanks for sharing...

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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8 posted 2001-06-27 01:05 AM


I enjoyed this and very glad to see a positive poem like this. I liked the message.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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9 posted 2001-06-28 06:11 AM


*I will survive...Ooooh as long as I know how to love, I know I'll stay alive!!*

Sorry about that.  

It's good to see you are being positive about this. Keep your head up and keep smiling.  

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

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10 posted 2001-07-05 01:51 AM


Great write, Rhonda.
I liked this.
Such a wonderful message.

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