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Tamma
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0 posted 2001-06-24 11:30 AM


She’s been calling you again
She says she still loves you
But you’re with me, now
She called when I was there
But he hung up the phone on her
He doesn’t like her much
He thinks she wants you back
And she’s trying to get me out
You say that ain’t gonna work
You tell me you love me
You say you wanna be with me
He says I’m the best girl you’ve had
That I’m good for you
You wanna spend tyme with me
You wanna be with me
My Sis thinks you’re “the one”
And she’s usually right
You wanna hold me in your arms
You wanna lie next to me in sleep
I want to be with you
I love you!



*sigh* nobody cares

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 06-24-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-06-24 12:13 PM


This is pretty good, Tamma.  You're lucky you found this person.  Cherish what you two have together.  You never know what might happen... Best of luck.

--Marie

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round.  And I still love you." –James T

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2 posted 2001-06-24 12:55 PM


Great work Tamma, i really enjoyed the read.
Andrew  

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3 posted 2001-06-24 02:27 PM


Ditto to what these kids already said... best of luck to you, Tamma.  We're all pulling for you.  
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4 posted 2001-06-24 02:34 PM


Some words of wisdom: (yes I am fond of quotes)
"The love we give away is the only one we keep."
-Elbert Hubbard

Keep your love and cherish it and he will remain with you for a long time.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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5 posted 2001-06-24 03:16 PM


Nice poem. Very sweet.  
You two are very lucky to have each other.

-Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

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6 posted 2001-06-24 03:45 PM


how positively sweet!  Wonderful expression.  Great poem!

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

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7 posted 2001-06-24 04:42 PM


wonderful way of showing your deepest feelings and emotions.  really sweet.  thanks for the read and keep it up

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8 posted 2001-06-24 07:24 PM


I hope she leves him alone.....
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9 posted 2001-06-24 08:02 PM


Oh hooray, you're happy! Yay!
Rhonda  

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katherine
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10 posted 2001-06-25 02:25 AM


this is sweet!
you're so lucky you've got him.
katie

fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you

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11 posted 2001-06-25 04:24 AM


ehh..i'm kinda bitter about luv now so i can't say my reply will be the best.  this is pretty kool tho.  not all love sucks...lol sorry. later
-fear-

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12 posted 2001-06-25 09:31 PM


that is really cute!! I hope everything works out for ya!!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

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13 posted 2001-06-26 03:09 AM


Lovely poem Tamma.....I enjoyed this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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A Cloud In the Sky
14 posted 2002-06-23 02:32 PM


Cute Poem-Wish i had a boyfriend
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15 posted 2002-06-23 02:32 PM


Cute Poem-Wish i had a boyfriend
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