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In My Place

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since 05-16-2001
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Moodus, Connecticut

0 posted 02-27-2002 11:35 AM       View Profile for baby0508   Email baby0508   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for baby0508

In My Place

You tell her words that you told me,
As I try hard to understand
What it is that I did wrong,
and why now you hold her hand.

You act like I'm not alive
I don't know why I even try
Why do you say that you don't care
If you can't bear to see me cry?

I remember when I was in her place
and I wish that she could see.
That everything you've said to her,
You've also said to me.

You promised this and promised that,
and not one promise was held true.
Now you promise her all the same,
And I only wish she knew.

Now you walk by me like I'm nothing,
I wonder if I'm even missed
How can you treat me like I'm nothing?
It's like I don't even exhist.

Why do you do this to me?
Why do I continue to hold on?
I just can't comprehend the fact,
That you are really gone.

I reminice in the past
As I give you one last glance
and I wish that she wasn't there
So that I could have another chance.

I'd give everything I have
To have another chance with you
I can't escape these memories,
I can't get over losing you.

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since 01-02-2002
Posts 86
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 02-27-2002 06:20 PM       View Profile for TigerZ   Email TigerZ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TigerZ

wow!  first of excellent poem...and second...please dont go back to him if thats what hes doing...hes not worth it at all and hell just hurt you over and over again...things will get better...youll see

once again...awesome poem!

A life without love…is no life at all.

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since 03-25-2001
Posts 6045
swimming in fairy floss.......

2 posted 02-28-2002 04:11 AM       View Profile for cherish   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherish

i second tiger...nicely writen


Torn are her limbs
By quiet hands that
Tug life(color) out of her.
Gnawing edges round
Into a broken(satisfying)

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since 06-05-2001
Posts 30
United States

3 posted 02-27-2003 05:19 PM       View Profile for HVNsnt82086   Email HVNsnt82086   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HVNsnt82086's Home Page   View IP for HVNsnt82086

This really was phenominal.  I can relate tho this soo well, and it's nice to know that someone else out there knows how it is.  I hope everything works out well for you in the end...keep writting!

Passion. It lies in all of us. Sleeping, waiting, and though unwanted, unbidden, it will stir. Open it's jaws, and howl.  It speaks to us, guides us.

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4 posted 04-24-2003 03:48 PM       View Profile for raiyne   Email raiyne   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for raiyne

i bet theres alot of people out there who can relate to this situation.
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5 posted 04-26-2003 03:19 AM       View Profile for Barbara   Email Barbara   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Barbara

I really like this poem. I am in this situaton right now, just like you are/were...
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