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FoxXena
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0 posted 06-22-2001 06:13 PM       View Profile for FoxXena   Email FoxXena   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for FoxXena

I know the title is from a Neal Diamond song.
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Say Hello to a stranger,
at least once a day,
then the world will be brighter,
and alienation will melt,
away.

Say hi a friend,
at least twice a day,
it'll let them know,
that your thinking of them,
twice over today.

Say hello to a friend of a friend,
three times a day,
because a friend of a friend,
is a stranger and a friend,
and that hello will work miracles,
everyone, everyday.

Hello  

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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1 posted 06-22-2001 06:18 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Hello  
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2 posted 06-22-2001 06:28 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Greetings!  

"Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school."

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3 posted 06-22-2001 06:31 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

btw....I've that song stuck in my head now LOL  
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4 posted 06-22-2001 06:38 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes



hello!  

~vicky



"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-22-2001).]

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5 posted 06-22-2001 06:52 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I liked this one  
Hi!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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6 posted 06-22-2001 08:38 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

Loved it a lot   hello  

hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare

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7 posted 06-22-2001 08:41 PM       View Profile for FoxXena   Email FoxXena   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FoxXena


Hello!!  
Its a great song to get stuck in your head. I like Neal Diamond myself, and he is a good singer. Thank you Dopey and Acire (cool name btw).


*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*


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8 posted 06-22-2001 09:23 PM       View Profile for DarkAngelOfTheStars   Email DarkAngelOfTheStars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DarkAngelOfTheStars

hey!  i liked this a lot  

one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live

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i enjoyed it ...andHELLO..

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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10 posted 06-23-2001 02:47 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

yes, he has a fantastic voice.....I like that song a lot   getting it stuck wasn't a bad thing  
katherine
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11 posted 06-23-2001 02:55 AM       View Profile for katherine   Email katherine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for katherine

This is cute.
Hello

katie

fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you

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12 posted 06-23-2001 10:50 AM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

HI, I really enjoyed this poem, keep up the good work  
Zu
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13 posted 06-23-2001 01:38 PM       View Profile for Allan Riverwood   Email Allan Riverwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Allan Riverwood

Nice work on it... creative, good use of line breaks.
Well hey there.  

Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day.  Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life.  
~Unknown

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14 posted 06-23-2001 01:50 PM       View Profile for Fading Away   Email Fading Away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Fading Away

I liked this!  Very cute.  Nice work!

hi!

"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round.  And I still love you." –James T

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15 posted 06-23-2001 05:14 PM       View Profile for chasing rain   Email chasing rain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chasing rain

Hi!
Hola!
Ciao!
Bonjour!
Hallo!
Buenas tardes!

Ok, I'll shut up now...

Onto the poem (ha, tricked you all):
This is a very nice piece. I like it! lots!
Keep it up!  

-Leah
FoxXena
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16 posted 06-24-2001 01:25 PM       View Profile for FoxXena   Email FoxXena   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FoxXena

Hey  

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

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17 posted 06-25-2001 12:59 PM       View Profile for Child of the Stars   Email Child of the Stars   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Child of the Stars

Hi there!! Cute poem, brigtened my day a little bit. Wise one, you are.   Keep postin.
  ~Carly

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..."
   ~Edouard Manet

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18 posted 06-25-2001 11:00 PM       View Profile for stace_co2003   Email stace_co2003   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit stace_co2003's Home Page   View IP for stace_co2003

I really like this...it's really cute. oh, and hello!  

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Heaven won't have me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.

CwboyAtHeart
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19 posted 06-26-2001 01:39 AM       View Profile for CwboyAtHeart   Email CwboyAtHeart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit CwboyAtHeart's Home Page   View IP for CwboyAtHeart

Hey!  Very good poem, I really liked it.  Hope to read more!

      - Cody -

If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

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20 posted 06-26-2001 05:33 PM       View Profile for FoxXena   Email FoxXena   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for FoxXena

Thank you all again for your comments.
Hello  

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Low Man's Lyric
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21 posted 06-27-2001 10:32 PM       View Profile for Low Man's Lyric   Email Low Man's Lyric   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Low Man's Lyric's Home Page   View IP for Low Man's Lyric

Ha ha ha, I liked it. Those waving smiley dudes are great! Hello

"Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before."
~Steven Wright

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22 posted 06-28-2001 11:29 PM       View Profile for anonymousfemale   Email anonymousfemale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for anonymousfemale

Aww how sweet. I'm sure many people will do this and get a kick out of it.

~AF~

Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!!

scout
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23 posted 06-29-2001 11:22 AM       View Profile for scout   Email scout   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit scout's Home Page   View IP for scout

great message! (great poem!)

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

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Hello!

^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^
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