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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
I know the title is from a Neal Diamond song. ----------------------- Say Hello to a stranger, at least once a day, then the world will be brighter, and alienation will melt, away. Say hi a friend, at least twice a day, it'll let them know, that your thinking of them, twice over today. Say hello to a friend of a friend, three times a day, because a friend of a friend, is a stranger and a friend, and that hello will work miracles, everyone, everyday. Hello  *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Greetings!  "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
btw....I've that song stuck in my head now LOL |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
hello! ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one Hi!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Loved it a lot hello hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Hello!! Its a great song to get stuck in your head. I like Neal Diamond myself, and he is a good singer. Thank you Dopey and Acire (cool name btw). *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ -Publilus Syrus*+* [This message has been edited by FoxXena (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
hey! i liked this a lot one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
i enjoyed it ...andHELLO.. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, he has a fantastic voice.....I like that song a lot getting it stuck wasn't a bad thing |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
This is cute. Hello katie fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
HI, I really enjoyed this poem, keep up the good work Zu |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Nice work on it... creative, good use of line breaks. Well hey there. Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I liked this! Very cute. Nice work! hi!"Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." –James T |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Hi! Hola! Ciao! Bonjour! Hallo! Buenas tardes! Ok, I'll shut up now... Onto the poem (ha, tricked you all): This is a very nice piece. I like it! lots! Keep it up! -Leah |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Hey *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hi there!! Cute poem, brigtened my day a little bit. Wise one, you are. Keep postin.~Carly "Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught..." |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
I really like this...it's really cute. oh, and hello! I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Hey! Very good poem, I really liked it. Hope to read more! - Cody - |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Thank you all again for your comments. Hello ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Ha ha ha, I liked it. Those waving smiley dudes are great! Hello "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww how sweet. I'm sure many people will do this and get a kick out of it. ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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scout Member
since 2001-06-16
Posts 175no place owns me |
great message! (great poem!) xscoutx |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Hello!^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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FlyingCloud Member
since 2003-04-28
Posts 151A little place inside my head |
Hello!^~Whoever does not love his work cannot hope that it will please others.~^ |
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kirhar Junior Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 13 |
this is awesome...oh HELLO |
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ShanniluvsDrew New Member
since 2003-09-12
Posts 1Australia |
That was so kool... I loved it... Keep on writing |
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baby1231 New Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 7 |
hello |
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