Teen Poetry #5 |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
I checked it once I checked it twice I wrote the first poem like three blind mice I'm the first in this forum can't you see the first poem was written by me. Like doctor suess not in a house or not with a mouse but I was the first to write right here but you will like it have no fear The first in forum five cause I, I will survive so now that it's here second best cause I was the first I beat all the rest I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say, I'm not asking you to hate me I just want you to relate don't forget about the message or the reason where on stage...dogwood [This message has been edited by the_rescue (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cute!! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Ha, so you're the first one eh just don't forget to keep sharing hi Sweets, Kris, Lizzy, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
this was a awesome poem, nice job. if love wants me, then it can come find me |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
This is VERY cute. *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hahahaha LOL I really liked this one. VERY well done. You start off forum #5 in the best way possible, with fun. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
haha this was cute i enjoyed it keep writing one morning you wake up afraid you are going to live |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 294....:::::******:::::.... |
nice. i like to open with a humorous tone myself. here we go again! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
yaaaay lol this is cute!! i have a question...can we still post in teen poetry #4 or r we supposed to post in this one now?? just curious. lol an amusing way to start #5 out with. nice work rescue. later -fear- "I know the pieces fit cause i watched them fall away"--TooL |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
probably a bit longer in 4 but I recomend posting in here now that 5 is open!! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh hooray! That was so cute! Rhonda "Who did that?" "Charlie and Blake." "Who's Charlie and Blake?" "Rhonda and Amy.""Great. There goes the school." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
LOL...very cute! enjoyed this one.. smiles, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
hahaha...i liked this poem ...and arent you special ...enjoyed the read...bye im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
hahaha cuteness katie fate can only take you so far, the rest is up to you |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Good work, I enjoyed the read and you have the honour to be the first person to post here. Zu "Here we are again Finding ourselves at the end Of the wrong stick I guess it's far too late I'm building up the barricades In my head" -My Vitriol |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is cute! I enjoyed this. Hehe.. keep posting all your work. --Marie "Well the sun is slowly sinking down, but the moon is slowly rising. So this old world must still be spinning 'round. And I still love you." –James T |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is incredible. Best poem I've ever read. I look forward to reading more... you just blew me away. ~Allan |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
Cute and creative No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
lol! Cute, simple and somewhat short...great job! -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
congrats! I was... (hold on)...12th. well at least the 12th poem. go me!!! |
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Dr. Jo-Bizz Member
since 2001-06-06
Posts 97 |
*glares jealously* But His word was in my heart |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
that is really cute, lol. really cute I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I know- I'm a lil late to reply... Better late than never! Cute stuff here Rescue. Quite creative. It put a smile on my face. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
heh this was cute **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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