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Snowdwen
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0 posted 2001-07-12 05:34 PM


  

With thorns of iron around her wrists
She searches for higher ground
Dragging with her the chains of wisdom
She wishes she had never found
Battling with the gods of love and hate
Temptation eating her mind
So many depending on the choices she makes
Is the blind leading the blind?
One more valley,one more sea,
one more mountain to climb
But should it all fall away tomorrow
Let the bells of August still chime


"You live you learn and life moves on"



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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-07-12 06:40 PM


Snowdwen, how deep you have gone.  But you have also helped us get to the surface. Very nice,  ME
Snowdwen
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 75
Louisiana
2 posted 2001-07-13 05:16 PM


Thanks ME! I try to.. paint a pitcher of what I'm feeling. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks!
Snow

"You live you learn and life moves on"



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