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John Yaws
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since 1999-10-09
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Texas

0 posted 2001-07-10 07:00 PM



I almost wish that I could saddle up,
And we could ride.
To places known only to God...
And there we could abide.

And hear the wind just rustling-
In the ash and pinion pine...
And gaze into each other's eyes,
Just below the timberline.

But the days when we were dreamers-
All now lie far in the past.
And our dreams and aspirations-
I fear are fading fast.

Now the timberwolves are howling-
And the hunting eagles cry...
Out there in the wild Sierras-
Where the dreams all go to die.

First the bustle of our living-
Seems to drain us of our will.
To seek our dreams of happiness
Our longings to fulfill...

Then we awake to realize-
How fast our days did fly...
And long to seek, and find, the place,
The dreams all go to die.

© Copyright 2001 John R. Yaws - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-07-10 07:08 PM


nicely done... I enjoyed
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2 posted 2001-07-10 07:13 PM


Very nice. "Where the dreams go to die". Something to think about.
Sandra

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Member Patricius
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3 posted 2001-07-10 10:30 PM


I hope all of your dreams have not gone off to die!  We all need to hang on to a few!
Really nice poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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4 posted 2001-07-11 06:46 AM


                "First the bustle of our living-
                 Seems to drain us of our will.
                 To seek our dreams of happiness
                 Our longings to fulfill...

                 Then we awake to realize-
                 How fast our days did fly...
                 And long to seek, and find, the place,
                 The dreams all go to die."

So true.....well written!

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
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Mississippi coast
5 posted 2001-07-11 06:53 AM


Great job. This one really hit home.

Melton

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