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Forever In Time
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Forever In Time |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Is this love we make in the shadows of these words or just fantasy? Is this happiness or only just a pretense to dull the nights pain? Can we really find two hearts that beat together forever in time? Dare we dream this dream of love that lasts a lifetime captured in a kiss... Say yes |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Oh give it a moment, and the "yes's" will be coming from all over... Very nice Paula! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, I'm certain, for I have seen it in progress, and though their lives have not ended, the particular ones I'm thinking of, I feel no doubt they will succeed. I know, too, that many others really have made it...but then, I think, that they have learned the REAL meaning of love. It is not just titillation and rhythm. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... I ejoyed a great deal |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
YES YES YES |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh,Paula~ This is just delicious ! !  I like it - I like it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kisses help to build the intensity of a relationship...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I'd like to say YES but the questions are so intense that I'm afraid.....wonderful thoughts and I appreciate your approach....well done!! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Yes, some might miss lead but in the heart this is every dream. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
And why not, Paula? Happiness is what blossoms inside of us, and even life is fleeting, so if the answer is yes, grab it for the while and the tender memories..very gentle smile for a very good write |
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Snowdwen Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 75Louisiana |
YES... Great read.. *hugs* "You live you learn and life moves on" |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Decaflame...well maybe...but theres only one yes I want to hear...thanks VAS...it takes work to make love happen...most people dont want to do that...thank you Cpat Hair...thank you Im glad you enjoyed it Sandra...LOL....thank you Marge...thanks I'm glad you did... James...kisses bridge a lot of gaps...thanks darlin ethome...fear stops more relationships from becoming all they can be....its sad...hugs sweet poet man... shadow974...yes it is...to find that one special person....thanks Logan...Ah but it takes TWO willing hearts Logan...thank you Snowie girl...hugs right back at ya baby...thanks |
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