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Our Cabin (part-ii)
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Our Cabin (part-ii) |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I catch my breath, for what I see, because I must see more... Your body so alluring in the tub, with bubbles galore... Through the darkness in the doorway I ask why you went away... With a coy voice, "To play a game", is what I hear you say... I ask you then if it's a game that I can join with you... And you reply that it's a game that's only made for two... From the smile on your countenance, it's plain for me to see You're enjoying the reaction you're eliciting from me... You're beckoning me closer with a fluid wave of hand So I oblige you as I see the oil bottle on the stand... I say, "You left me cold out there, when you left me alone..." But I can see, as you look at me, you have plans of your own... I kneel beside you and your tub when from out of nowhere, A solitary feather gently lands upon your hair... You smile as I reach to show you your new little friend You say, "It found me...", I reply, "It must have been your scent..." I trade the feather for the bottle which I open, to reveal... A fragrance so appealing that we both begin to feel A tingle that in seconds overwhelms our self-control, Though we try ignoring that which really wants to take its toll... I put the oil in my palm and see you blow a bubble... I gently catch the little orb, like magic, without trouble, And as it rests upon the oil within my shiny palm, With ceremonious respect, I present it to you... You're eyes show wonder and great pleasure, though outside you're calm And I proceed to baste your neck and sensuous shoulders too... Your skin feels like the silk and satin I have thought about... Purring and relaxing while things are getting taut... (Copyright 1998 by: MARK V SHELDON) "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
what a tale of seduction..( whew).. Nicely done Mark... I enjoyed the word play and twist of phrase "you blow a bubble... I gently catch the little orb, like magic, without trouble" Made me think of skaespeare's witches...but not in such a way that it took away from the mood, rather added an air of mystery..playful mystery... again, I enjoyed |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, Ron... luckily, in this "play", she's considerably more attractive... -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Heating up all the way in New Hampshire..This is deliciously sexy. Sandra |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
It is summer, afterall, Sandra... ;-> -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hot stuff! Reader absorbing material....well done Mark! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thanks, ethome... this was the second part to PART-I, posted here earlier... Thanks for the reply. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Mark, My temperature began rising with every sensual word! Very, very well portrayed, and felt in every deep longing. What a story!! Elise |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Elise: yummy! ;-> Thanks for the read and reply. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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