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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-07-10 10:50 AM

I followed dreamlines
Finding this place
Far back
Time danced faces greeting
Tales whispered
Of roo
Of snake
Wisdoms shown
On converging lines
Leading
Always leading
Forward past
Last and first
To spiraled dots
That are part
As we are
And one legged
Patience watches
Seeing more
While most
See only
With their
Eyes

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-07-10 10:54 AM

this ping-pong effect between adult and childhood then back again,

then the imagery alone....

one should never simply read your writings....

they should be inhaled....

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

2 posted 2001-07-10 10:55 AM

Deep and thought-provoking... could be a number of subjective interpretations here. Enjoyed.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-10 10:57 AM

Thank you..some say I have inhaled too much, and that is why they sometimes seem to make little sense...

The poem was written thinking about aboriginal belief in dreamlines...which I found most interesting to read about..and then think about the wisdoms behind their beliefs...

thanks for the comment!!

Lady In White

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4 posted 2001-07-10 11:02 AM

Wasn't it in the movie The Right Stuff that the Aborigines were featured when Glenn made his flight, and saw their bonfires from space, spiraled dots...

that is at least what I came around to thinking as I read this....

I could be mistaken about the movie, and mixing one scene with another....

but that is in my recall....

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-07-10 11:07 AM

I don't know. I never saw that movie.
Sounds like an inspiring scene though...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-07-10 11:08 AM

What did you inhale Ron, and for how long

"one legged patience" A wonderful phrase among wonderful phases.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

7 posted 2001-07-10 11:16 AM

Interloper... I worked one summer years ago in a bowling alley... refinishing lanes... lots of things to inhale that year.. ( laughing)

Thanks for the comments... and glad you liked...

cpalmer
Senior Member

since 2001-06-26

Posts 977
Phoenix, Az

8 posted 2001-07-10 11:22 AM

Cpat
Interesting.....
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

9 posted 2001-07-10 11:43 AM

Thanks Cindi...

serenity blaze
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Posts 27738

10 posted 2001-07-10 01:04 PM

R--just hope you weren't sniffing the shoes...

but anyhoo..you had to know I would like this one! So many interesting customs regarding the dreamworld (and I am suppressing the urge to quote again..smile)

I enjoyed this veddy much!

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-04-28 04:04 AM

damn good

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