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Borrowing Lines
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Borrowing Lines |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Borrowing lines he was calm in his thinking a most logical bloke until thoughts of her tickled his fancy as the breeze played her skirt a slight moistness came to his brow his breathing shallowed, as he claimed vow when thoughts of her tickled his fancy as her fingers played his shirt his mind playing tricks, she was no where to be seen but his vow he would keep, e’en she be but dream as thoughts of her tickled fancies that he thought had faded away still her touch caressed his cheek so light, though no one near him his breath caught tight thoughts of her tickled his fancy as the light played green eyes snippets of time, when woven around build one up, or grind one down, he chose to climb the pile of thoughts to reach the edge that dreams brought, where thoughts of her tickled his fancy as the breeze played her skirt as he gazed forward with ensue for the day she’d gently finger his shirt… |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Nicely fanciful and creative... I enjoyed the read... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Yes, forward looking  |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
Very beautiful.......... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely dream and I like the positive ending! Very enjoyable read! |
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