Sweetness of Song---a duet, with Logan

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-07-09 11:06 PM

I walk the mists within my sleep,
never sure of what I seek.
But now and then, I know I'll find--
and dwell the plane left far behind.

And there-familiarity--
the warmth of home--
her soul does seek.
There, in dream's reality
is all I ever needed--
BE.

The times--the past lives in the soul
never forgotten, always to hold...
Two, once one, to be again
drifting back to all begin...

As the land reclaims herself
so will soul trek through cold hell
to find the start--begin again-
and start anew to make amend.

Mistakes made then were but to teach,
to keep love in the soul, in reach.
to be once more is to understand
we live again, in touch of hand.

Forgive me then,
I search for door,
I do not want to live--
no more!!!
Break the cycle of rebirth
and the chains of pain to Earth...

Then to the past to find out why
for all we can, is live and try.
We have no choice but travel on...
until we hear sweetness of song.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-07-09 11:51 PM

The times--the past lives in the soul
never forgotten, always to hold...
Two, once one, to be again
drifting back to all begin...
As the land reclaims herself
so will soul trek through cold hell
to find the start--begin again-
and start anew to make amend.
Mistakes made then were but to teach,
to keep love in the soul, in reach.
to be once more is to understand
we live again, in touch of hand.
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there is a definate sweetness to this song...
this is so cool you two...
your harmonies of poetry are perfect...
a wisdom and cadence kissed intend ...
well done Poetess serene and poet Logan

me

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-07-10 01:24 AM

Excellent write, guys...you make a fantastic writing pair...I truly love this...going to save this to read again...

sp

it was love that first drew me,
it is love that will keep me here...
now I see love burning brightly
when everything else is unclear...

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2001-07-10 01:33 AM

*sigh*
Excellence, you two.

both!

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

4 posted 2001-07-10 02:34 AM

NOW who is the "queen"? Great write you two...

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

5 posted 2001-07-10 03:43 AM

Goog job.....but what is BE

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-07-10 09:38 AM

Oh dear, the two of you in combination is altogether too special. Love the theme here, and the flow, the words, the whole thing!
Peace
Sandra

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-07-10 09:50 AM

Serenity and Logan~
Gentle voice of ancient spirit
sent to guide soul to the light~

Wonderful, you two !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2001-07-10 03:29 PM

wow amazing stuff you guys make a great team. Reminds me seren, I am going to have to get moving on our effort.

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

9 posted 2001-07-10 03:58 PM

Not sure where one begins, and where one ends....which is the true writing of a good duet....a wonderfully mingling of minds to be sure....

both of you aligned well with the other, we hope to see much more....

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