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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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*don't worry this is not personally about me* could anyone help me think of a creative title?  Senryu Ache molests the day rainbow colors bleed to void depression's shadow By Melissa P. Monette |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
dark..and painful work... nicely crafted. As for a title perhaps "colorless" or Colorless Pain nice work! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
fleeting pain is gone see rainbow and it's promise joy heals all in time ~*~ How about "colorless shadow" or "shadow's void?" |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Title: Tormented Light |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Thank you for the title suggestions, I'll have to think about which will be the final title~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheks) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, your words and tears fall in your words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, my heart is with you always! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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