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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-07-09 01:31 PM





Not to Forget

in quiet stillness
pen by side, paper left white
questions roam day’s night

still in quietness
smiling visions shining down
warmth encompassing

motionless silence
solemnity surrounds all
prayers upward fly

damp cries are for we
for you have gained all, no loss
joyful heaven sings

soon Muse exiles tears
whispers of pen up, now shine
in memory, write




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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-07-09 02:53 PM


we cry with you Lady...
and this is lovely and perfect in its intend.
one for the "treasure chest"
heart hugs
me

Feels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me the light

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2 posted 2001-07-09 03:00 PM


Lady:

"motionless silence
solemnity surrounds all
prayers upward fly

damp cries are for we
for you have gained all, no loss
joyful heaven sings"

You speak for many who mourn...with your beautiful heart cry.

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3 posted 2001-07-10 09:29 AM


Amen
Waseem Cheema
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4 posted 2001-07-10 09:34 AM


Not to Forget
................I will not forget as it is very beautiful written........ Thanx  

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