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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-07-09 11:47 AM


no longer ask why
you missed all of life’s pleasures
somnambulation


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1 posted 2001-07-09 11:50 AM



but in quiet reach
as things go quickly by you
deepest introspect

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2 posted 2001-07-09 11:54 AM


sleep walking stumble
bruised understanding toe
I walk limping

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3 posted 2001-07-09 12:01 PM


Well that explains it!
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4 posted 2001-07-09 12:03 PM


Lady ~
grasping quietude
life passes in slow motion
now thoughts turn inward

Ron ~
sleepily stumb'ling
ingrown toenail now throbbing
in obvious pain

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5 posted 2001-07-09 12:04 PM


Catalinamoon ~ Yes, if you say so

inot2B
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6 posted 2001-07-09 12:10 PM


I guess it's one way to get through life. But nothing to reflect on when ready to depart.
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2001-07-09 12:17 PM


Interloper,
Clever, enjoyed

Waseem Cheema
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8 posted 2001-07-09 01:08 PM


When I have a first sight on the topic.......
I recalled "ARMY"...........LOL

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-07-09 01:36 PM


Well I sure want to give you a swell reply as soon as I've looked up somnambulation.
Haven't the faintest clue what it means      

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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where the sky and horizon meet
10 posted 2001-07-09 04:49 PM


ahh...too many people live this way!    great poem...so much said in so few words!  But I'm sure you get that a lot  
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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11 posted 2001-07-09 06:38 PM


huh??  what???

oh. . . what did I miss???  

great job my friend. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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12 posted 2001-07-09 07:44 PM


inot2B ~ Amen my friend.  Hay, where can I get an old Kawasaki Voyager zn(?)1300 ... about an '85-87 model?

Sy ~ Why thank you friend

Waseem ~ I see ... the armies of the world are much the same in that regard  

Titia ~  

SK ~ Yes, but you can keep on sayin' it  

Sven ~ Did you know you snored   Thanks pal.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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13 posted 2001-07-10 12:30 PM


How do ya DO this...haiku---senryu they all make me nuts!!!! er..nuttier?

But this is superb...always a thoughtful read from you!!!

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14 posted 2001-07-10 12:33 PM


serenity ~ Haiku - of nature.  Senryu - not of nature.

Thank you.

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15 posted 2001-07-10 12:51 PM


nature, not nature
and so, I.-, what's your nature?
yawn, step, yawn, snore, step?


sorry, couldn't resist


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16 posted 2001-07-10 01:09 PM


VAS ~ Naturally ...

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17 posted 2001-07-10 01:52 PM


InterLoper~

Walking quietly
I stumble over whispers
Left in the dreaming


~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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18 posted 2001-07-10 07:08 PM


dreaming of whispers
wafting through mind silently
caressing your thoughts

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth


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