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Open Poetry #14

Tight

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

0 posted 2001-07-09 06:28 AM

When I Cry embrace
loving arms encase
realize,
I am on your side;

Anywhere that love flows
heart & soul goes,
chasing
trying to add spark
to creations bright
streaming lights.
Travelling through throes
following the nose:

Burning with joy
enlightened & coy
skipping tides,
finding where love abides;

Released from loving arms
& the stars start to fall,
thank you! with fresh eyeball.
Each twinkle lands,
own little place.
Far flung corners,
standing space:

Future bring
two soul mates tight.
Touching close, feelings unite;

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-07-09 06:33 AM

I like the future prediction....I hope it all works out that way....good poem!

helen smith
Member

since 2001-03-12

Posts 240

2 posted 2001-07-09 07:54 AM

I like Tight.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-07-09 09:15 AM

nice... enjoyed!!

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

4 posted 2001-07-10 07:42 AM

Very beautiful ..... make me to read it again and again....

thecraig
Member

since 2001-03-11

Posts 223

5 posted 2001-07-10 08:25 PM

Thank you. The Poem was a far flung cuddle to those reaching with internet arms. Thank you, Ethome, Helen, Capt Hair & Waseem Cheema

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