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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-07-09 06:19 AM

Echoes the Night

I lay awake, remembering firsts,
communicating with my thoughts.
I can daydream my nights away
wanting to drift in pleasantries,
mood away my blues with
soft memories of you.

I leave a candle to show the way,
keeping my passions burning
waiting for your shadow
to play upon me,
to touch me with your eyes,
to release in me the whispers
I secure in hold for only you.

I shall linger beneath the warmth
of dreams across time,
echoing moments shared,
until swept into a pattern of hold,
as I chamber you within my heart
beneath the canopy of night
waiting for the light of day
to return me, to the real and you.

Under darkness, you cover my time,
comforting me in travel,
paving the road to sleep
with your presence lighting my way,
allowing tomorrow to join my today
in a love that shall never fade,
as long as my mind is landscaped
by the world of you.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 07-09-2001).]

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-07-09 06:37 AM

Beautiful poetry as usual!!

Love the creativeness of these lines...

                "with your presence lighting my way,
                 allowing tomorrow to join my today
                 in a love that shall never fade,
                 as long as my mind is landscaped
                 by the world of you."

Those memories oh so strong....They bring out the poet in you!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-09 08:53 AM

I leave a candle to show the way,
keeping my passions burning
waiting for your shadow
to play upon me,
to touch me with your eyes,
to release in me the whispers
I secure in hold for only you

Strong memories... which seem to have bittersweetness in them... I enjoyed the read..as usual..

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-07-09 09:09 AM

Nakd,
allowing tomorrow to join my today
a wonderful line. Enjoyed

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

4 posted 2001-07-09 10:00 AM

wynter,

beautiful!! your heart is diplayed
here with these soft sentiments. lovely
work! take care.

amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

5 posted 2001-07-09 11:07 AM

Rich colors across a mural of emotions -- pictures taken with the saturating exposure of the correct words chosen. Very scenic. And relateable.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear; few can listen."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-07-09 11:26 AM

Ah, Maureen at her pinnacle

Well done!

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

7 posted 2001-07-11 09:25 PM

hmmmm...I know this feeling well.

[This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (edited 07-11-2001).]

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-07-13 07:58 PM

I love every line!

ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

9 posted 2001-07-14 03:50 AM

A lovely submission, Ms NT!

Softly alluring. *smiles* SR

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