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Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
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Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2001-07-09 02:43 AM


hey yall
*hugs to all*  this is the first thing i have posted in a very very very long time. tell me what yall think.  hope ya like it  

Wishing For Love

my hearts been shatterd a thousand times
you think it woudnt hurt anymore
but here i am again with the peices in my hands
crying and shaking on the floor
scars on my heart
go deep to my soul
happyness is mocking me
while lonelyness takes its toll
what do i always do wrong?
to make love run away
is it something i dont do?
or the things i dont say?
i always hear that i am a pefect little angel
they wish there boyfirends where more like me
if i am so perfect why am i alone
thats something i just cant see
always a friend
and never a lover
crying in the shadows
watching you with the others
wishing i was the one
that you held tight
the one that you loved
with all of your might
but you are lost in him
and i have lost myself
so you have put my love
way up on a shelf
i have such a huge heart
i wish someone would give me that chance
to show them how much love i have
to dazzle them with romance
but they see my long hair, my tattoos, my scars
and they run away
never getting a chance to see the real me
to see that i aint really that way
all i really am
is a lonely helpless soul
crying out for someone to hold me
someone to fill this hole
someone to love me
someone to care
someone that wont leave me
in my time of dispair
i know that i aint beautiful
i know i aint that smart
and that the only thing i can give to someone
is my batterd broken heart
i hope that someone takes it
and loves it once again
i hope that one day
i will be more then just a friend
till then i stare up in the sky
and wish on the stars so bright
for someone to be mine
and hold me with all there might
if tomarrow comes
and i am still just a friend
then i will be back here tomarrow night
wishing for love again...

Jesse C. Jaymz

When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :(

© Copyright 2001 Jesse Jaymz - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-07-09 04:38 AM


Yeah this is good Jesse...James
catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-07-09 07:47 AM


Sweet poet, we all wish for love, you speak for many.
Peace
Sandra

Tamma
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3 posted 2001-07-09 01:32 PM


Jesse! I'll always love you! *hugz and kisses*

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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Netherlands
4 posted 2001-07-09 01:41 PM


i hope that one day
i will be more then just a friend
till then i stare up in the sky
and wish on the stars so bright
for someone to be mine


You have to look down pal, cause there are the ladies  

Very nice write, loved it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
5 posted 2001-07-09 02:11 PM


So glad to see you back and writing for us.
I've learned from years of observing that man is not just his outside appearance but what he shows from his heart. You kind Sir show nothing but love. Jesse look around, she may be there waiting for you to notice her. Good luck!

WhiteDragon
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since 2001-07-07
Posts 70
O-town, Fl
6 posted 2001-07-09 02:19 PM


Jesse, that was amazing.  I thoroughly enjoyed it.  I know what it feels like to just be a friend when you want more.  Keep writing.  God BLess, Jeremy
Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
7 posted 2001-07-09 03:22 PM


james:  thank you my friend

sandra:  *hugs*  you have been a good friend threw all of this.  *hugs*  thank you hun.  you have a place in my heart always.  

tamma:  *hugs*  you made this southerner blush.  you know if i could get to see ya on my trip this week i would retun that hug with much love     thank you so much  

Titia:  i am very glad you liked this.  and thank you so much for the e-mail.     i hope to get to know ya better  *hugs*  hopefully i will learn how to use those grapics one of these days hehehehee  

inot2B:  i will have to start looking around.  just wish i could see what everyone else see's in me.  thank you for the reply and the welcome back  

WhiteDragon:  thank you so much for the reply.     and let me welcome you to passions.  and yes it is VERY hard being only a friend when you love so much.  very hard.     thanks agian  

When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :(

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
8 posted 2001-07-09 05:30 PM


hey angel..good to see you here    

i have much to say..but will be here all day if i get started...   so i'll come back later to get all philisophical on ya..  

for now though..yes i think this is a good poem..and i'm so glad you decided not to fly too far away from us    so long as youve got soul to lend..this is a great place to lend it    

remember, your wings take you where you choose, angel...  

hugs, g

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."  
-Stone Temple Pilots

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9 posted 2001-07-09 11:46 PM


JesseJaymz~
Sweetie ... believe it or not ...
she just hasn't come your way YET !
She will and when she does ... I'm gonna
be right here to remind you that
We told you so !

You ARE an !
Keep smiling ... keep winging it ! !
Love n' hugs~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com               

Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
10 posted 2001-07-10 01:24 PM


dgvarner:  i know you could get talking all day     and if it wasnt for those days of talking i might be worse then i am.  *hugs*  thank you hun for being there for me     oh yeah and guess what??  give me about a month and your gonna get a surprize  *shhhh*  

Marge:  hun you are such a sweetie.  *hugs and lots of kisses*  i have been trying to get a hold of you on icq but i never see you on.  please e-mail me    would love to chat with you. and thank you again.  and i cant wait for the day when you can tell me i told you so     your the angel not me  

Jesse

When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :(

dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2001-07-10 01:49 PM


a surprise??  cool!     my tape you promised??  that wont take a month (!) will it??  

"If you should die before me, ask if you could bring a friend."  
-Stone Temple Pilots

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
12 posted 2001-07-10 04:00 PM


hun
*hugs*  better then a tape     it was something i thought of last night.  when i see you on i will tell ya     didnt see you today     hope to see you soon hunny

jesse

When I was a young man I vowed never to marry until I found the ideal woman. Well, I found her - but, alas, she was waiting for the perfect man. :(

Victoria
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Posts 5869

13 posted 2001-07-10 05:24 PM


Glad to see you writing again jesse.. hugss
keep up the good work.  

               ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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Somewhere... out there...
14 posted 2001-07-10 09:13 PM



Jesse-
   Glad you're posting again..
   This just has an all too familiar
   ache to it...i can relate to this
   one more than you know.
   you've expressed these feelings well.  
   Just don't ever give up...she will
   come along someday, and she'll be
   sorry she didn't find you sooner..

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Blaec
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since 2001-04-23
Posts 130
The Sunshine State
15 posted 2001-07-10 09:23 PM


This is beautiful.  I hope that you find the love that you are aching for.

Kris

Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2001-07-10 09:36 PM



Gotcha' covered !

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com               

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
17 posted 2001-07-11 06:57 AM


Hold on to those thoughts and dreams Jesse!   Very nicely written piece!
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