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I Could Fall In Love With You
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I Could Fall In Love With You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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my little chant my head is up I smell romance A certain tingling aware as if I'd known you always there. and for awhile I'd feel brand new with quickened beating of my heart and beg don't stop what didn't start... awaiting the elusive sleep where everything be as it seems and live my life asleep in dreams. but do not wish for this to end... Yes, I could fall in love with you-- oh how I wish you'd say, "me too." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Oh I could fall in love with you, and for awhile I'd feel brand new with quickened beating of my heart and beg don't stop what didn't start... ================================ some body turn on the bug light... somebody blow out the pretty blue flame somebody call the moths home... the names may be changed but the game ends the same *sigh* (somebody put away the mirror)*wink*  meFeels like Im dancing with truth and wisdom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and live my life asleep in dreams. ..don't do that..I have been doing that myself too long now.... live your dreams now...awake...you do write well, ya know that? and this did make me smile and almost want to write one by the same title...*s huggss M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice flow in this. And that hopeful feeling, the wish that someone would take you up on the thought..I feel it too. Great write. Sandra |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, what a nice write, and dreams? well, don't we all have dreams that take us away, on other planes and thoughts astray?...gentle smile |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
serenity This was so very beautiful, yet heartbreaking. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Very nice indeed. I loved the flow. And what a coincidence, I just finished listenin to the song of the same title by Selena. Keep it up. Jeremy |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwwwwwww......... that's so special................!!!!!!!! *sigh* goodluckharpo once it's done there's no turning back except in search of paramedics the ones that showed up here didn't have instructional manuals, btw, to figure out how to hold me down and i kick so? ****it.............. ROFL!!!!!! good luck girl........... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yeah.......oh, I do like this......and know just what you mean.....  |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Forgive me now my little chant my head is up I smell romance A certain tingling aware as if I'd known you always there. and live each day in eagered keep awaiting the elusive sleep where everything be as it seems and live my life asleep in dreams. ========================= Wow.......just beautiful.....  I loved it all the way....... Thank you ************************* It's only me.......only me |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Boo again, I'll be back. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Surely he'll say me too? What could ever be better!........ If I fell in love with you would you promise to be true and help me understand Cause I've been in love before and I know that love is more than just holding hands. (Lennon & McCartney) So simple but such a beautiful place to be! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Very light and airy. It's nice to be nice to the nice. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, I'm tempted but don't think I could live through the trip. LOL wonderful write. Sy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
S- this is beautiful! lovely thoughts from your heart...a little sad though too. lovely strokes from that wonderful pen of yours girlie. loved this, i did!! take care of yourself. amy p.s & good luck.  "but i see your true colors, |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Love it |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
JM---I know you know that I know YOU know!  M---have missed you! and this one seems to be one we can all relate to...lol..with sighs and hugs! Hope you are well! Sandra--I've got a feeling that you DO have something waiting for you, probably been right in front of you all the time too! Logan--wishing you the sweetest dreams...thank you gentle friend! Sue---have been running behind on e mail again, need to e ya soon...thanks for being patient with me and popping in to read! Jeremy...thank you for reading and I hope to catch up and read some of your work as well! doreen? Paramedics? Hmmm...What do they look like? ROFL...Lord knows I need SOMEBODY to take care of me! sigh...hugs lucy! SEA...we DO get cautious, don't we? lol...thanks lady, for your kindness! MYM...thank YOU, and you are another that I have to read soon, thank you again for the wow...(one of my favorite words! Phil? Masked Intruder does suit you! LOL...write me some time, will ya? geez... eric...hmm...COULD fall in love? With you, it's too late! But I suppose I'll just have to pick a number, wait in line and worship you from afar!  Thank you my friend!RS...it's ALL nice! sy...sigh...my reputation is killing all my action! Thank you, you make me smile.Amy--Hey GAL!!! just a whimsy little ditty, don't worry, I don't think I'm ready to walk that tightrope without a net...er...for now! Thanks lady!Interloper...thank you again, you are TOO kind... Thanks to all, with Hugs-n-Love...! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I do not want to love again, but do not wish for this to end... Yes, I could fall in love with you-- oh how I wish you'd say, "me too." A strange thing this love, it does not follow logic it happens and we are helpless, such a beautiful and cruel emotion. I hope that one day he does say "me too." Be well, my southern friend. I got to get together with muse and start our duet, but alice has been keeping me busy... I will explain next time we chat. "Like Sand underneath the snow, I make you mine." Kristin Hersh |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
afraid I'm with Sy on this one you add a nice touch of whimsey here not often seen...I like it! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
This one is terrific, serenity!! All writing comes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
brian...thank you...and even if love DID follow logic, somehow I think I'd STILL be in trouble... Michael...thanks for admiring my whimsy! And I am a bit amused at the idea of serenity inspiring fear in men... Lone Wolf...thanks, you are pretty terrific too!!!! Now everybody...go fall in love! BWAHAHAHA....  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know...sigh |
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