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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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Florida

0 posted 2001-07-08 03:22 PM



Far from here,
my mind wanders,
about things that love should not experience.
Silent echoes call my name
and temptation seems to great.
Agonizing, fantasizing
needing some distraction from myself,
is then I lose myself,
into the vagueness of one touch.
Which could not mean much
only a moment,
only to break from love.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
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Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-07-08 03:25 PM


but the vagueness of that touch lingers for a very long time, if not forever.  Thank you for this one, Walker...I always enjoy reading your thoughts!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-07-08 06:06 PM


Interesting, I would like to hear part two of this story. Well written.
Sandra

JLR
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since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-07-09 01:07 AM


Needing some distraction from myself...love this line.  Great write, walker!
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-07-09 10:11 AM


Yes, give us part two ...  
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