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Evening Snapshots
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Evening Snapshots |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Evening Snapshots Virginia Salter Crisscross applesauce on store front sidewalk watching knees and feet go by Cigarette smoke corn dog scents blowing in the wind Touch of amber sifting in to gray marshmallow clouds Country gospel rockin’ ‘round twixt rollin’ jazz Farmer’s market Pepsi wagon puppies, kids, and ants Lamp posts glow a yellow-sun glimmer as sun's dying rays burn a window ‘neath nimbus and there’s music in the street. . . © July 14, 2000 |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
"Willoughby... next stop: Willoughby." Sounds like a place I'd like to visit. Nicely portrayed, Virginia. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
what a great read, so specific and that first line! wow, I really got into this one! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
It happens every Friday night during the summer months in Pendleton, Oregon. They call it "Friday Night Alive." There's even dancing in the street while the musicians play, allbeit mostly little children stealing the show. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
And music in your verse  |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you, Interloper, too, for reading and your sweet comment.You have brought me up from the depths of the forum.  |
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WhiteDragon Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 70O-town, Fl |
Very nice use of imagery. Wish it was like that 'round here. God Bless, Jeremy |
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