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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-07-08 09:43 AM


My love has eyes of misty blue
unless the sun touches just right
then they become a green so true
a peridot in full moonlight.

My love has heart of golden rays
and strength such as you've never seen
he can hold up a world of pain
to let you on his shoulder lean.

My love has riches far beyond
the shallow dreams of common life
his silver tears will fall upon
all those who call to him in strife.

My love is for the universe
follow your heart, dismiss the curse.

[This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 07-08-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2001-07-08 09:46 AM


Colorful tribute of uncursed verse.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-07-08 09:59 AM


Cat, this is lovely...and quietly peaceful...
Victoria
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3 posted 2001-07-08 10:11 AM


love it sandra..truly enjoyed hon..hugss

              ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2001-07-08 10:21 AM


Catalinamoon,
Nice one, I enjoyed.

MARK V SHELDON
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5 posted 2001-07-08 10:52 AM


May he find you and turn mythology into reality.

-MVS

"If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn."

"Everyone can hear;  few can listen."

Sven
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6 posted 2001-07-08 12:20 PM


yes. . . I like the power behind this. . .

think it and make it happen. . .

wonderful Sandra. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

athena4
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7 posted 2001-07-08 03:47 PM


Sandra,
    Myths do imitate reality.  He is out there, just always KTDA.... Loved this...
            Love, Elise

Sunnyone
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8 posted 2001-07-08 05:40 PM


Oh, now this I love!!!!!!!!  Really!!!!!!!
but where have I seen this person before, I just wonder?  Great job, lil sis.....you do know how to write 'em!!!!!  

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


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9 posted 2002-03-24 12:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, and very soon your love will fill you with all this magic, sweet friend! Your words always shine with the magic of romance, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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