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Temptress
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0 posted 2001-07-07 11:51 PM


Something about you still remains wonderful.
In all my passion, truth, and lies,
You shine there in the dark of the midnight sky,
And make my inner secrets flow from my hands.
As my hands betray my innocent mischief,
I surpass myself,
and begin to write of true beauty.
I begin to write of you.




[This message has been edited by Temptress (edited 07-07-2001).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-07-07 11:53 PM


indeed. . . you do write of it well. . . and if this is your secret. . . then it's no wonder your writings are so passionate and deep. . .  

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Logan
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2 posted 2001-07-08 12:26 PM


Gentle one, then he is most fortunate for your words to flow as they do, based on thoughts of him..this is very well done, as you always do...very gentle smile
VAS
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3 posted 2001-07-08 01:59 AM


this is tender caressing
lunatic
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4 posted 2001-07-09 09:45 AM


Thank you
Qumar Fatthi
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5 posted 2001-07-09 03:55 PM


yeh!
i feel............

Something about you still remains wonderful.
In all my passion, truth, and lies,

u r writting well dear!


Moonlight Romeo
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6 posted 2002-05-06 01:53 PM


Perhaps also, you begin to write of yourself??

Just me again, seeing where you get your inspiration.

Thank you.

What light through yon window breaks?  It is the east, and Juliet is the sun.

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-01-14 02:40 AM


it never really goes away
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