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WhiteDragon
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0 posted 2001-07-07 11:31 PM


Girls say they want a guy who's sensitive,
what a load of crap.
From my experience i'm positive,
that nice guys finish last.
You share your hopes and dreams with me,
but your love I am denied.
When all is said and done you'll see,
through all the tears you've cried,
that my love is the one for you,
but will it be too late?
For many tears I've cried too,
and given up on fate.
But then i see your smile shine through,
and everything is fine.
I guess the wait will  have to do,
until your heart's in mine.
Jeremy Carey



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BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
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1 posted 2001-07-08 12:07 PM


love is a hard thing to deal with sometimes it actually sucks. but hey we're only human we are programed to love.
Awesome Write!
BirdeeB

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-07-08 01:33 AM


Jeremy I do believe they want a man that can be sensitive when necessary and a mmf when necessary...James
Paula Finn
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3 posted 2001-07-08 01:37 AM


You sound kinda bitter...and like James says....we do want a sensitive guy...but not a pushover ya know? LOL just like guys want a woman who is feminine but not clingy...its a fine line we walk where love is concerned...welcome to Passions
VAS
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4 posted 2001-07-08 01:43 AM


Welcome!!!

It probably has to do with the woman...and just WHERE the guy is sensitive, some want the guy sensitive to their needs and not his own.  Kind of a "me"ness to that isn't it.  I know the world's got the guys all mixed up as to what line they're to walk, how does one 'care for' someone without 'managing' them?  But, you know, women are just confused, too, as to what they're supposed to do.  

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5 posted 2001-07-08 01:52 AM


Welcome!   I understand your feelings here.....don't have any advice at the moment, but I liked the way you have expressed yourself  Will look for more.......
Sunshine
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6 posted 2001-07-08 07:19 AM


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WhiteDragon
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7 posted 2001-07-08 08:58 AM


Hey all, thanks for all the replies!  I actually started this poem in 8th grade about a girl who I liked that I watched date jerk after jerk while i was there the whole time.  Last night, after almost 3 years I decided to finish it :-)  Thanks again, God Bless.  Jeremy
Qumar Fatthi
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since 2001-05-20
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8 posted 2001-07-09 03:25 PM


u r a good observer............
and nicely written
carry on..............................


serenity blaze
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9 posted 2001-07-09 04:15 PM


I have to confess to the truth of this...and it's something I am coming to terms with too. I think in my case it had to do with the idea, that a guy who was a jerk was something familiar to me--and that says more about ME then it does about the nice guys that I chose to ignore. (may I suggest you go for the older ladies, who now know better?   rofl...) Welcome to Passions!
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10 posted 2001-07-09 07:37 PM


well. . . the ladies here have totally said what I was going to say. . . they're great aren't they??

great job. . . and Welcome!!!!  

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