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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-07-08 12:46 PM






"Questions to my love"

do you know how beautiful you are
or how incredible it feels to have your love
do u realize that I cherish you so
that i thank my lucky stars above

do u realize that you are so amazing
that there is so much of you I adore
since you walked into my life
you've opened love's door

do you understand how much i need you
the trivial things matter not
the sweetest things in life
are things that can't be bought

come to me darling
let's make this a reality once and for all
I won't promise you that everything will be perfect
but I can promise you, I’ll catch you should you fall

I’ve never loved like this before
our kisses linger in the air
yes come to me darling
that's if you dare

but if it's still too much too soon
this I shall understand
just realize you hold my heart
in the palm of your hand

we're scared together
I can feel it in the words you don't say
as I quietly
brush my own tears away

just knowing I have your love
brings me comfort and peace of mind
in the depths of you
me, I did find

AMK
July 3rd 2001


"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 07-09-2001).]

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Marsha
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1 posted 2001-07-08 05:33 PM


Darling girl this is utterly fabulous the writing is as always utterly perfect.

The words are beautiful as are you love. Absolutely excelent  

Take care
Love and warm stuff
Mushy
  

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2001-07-09 05:26 PM


Your poem offers much devotion and discovery.
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