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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-07-07 08:49 PM






becalmed

cordillera runs amethyst
caliginous zephyrs over flow
oceanic swells beckon
moments befall seasons ago

meerschaum to play thy feet
sea’s green to meet thy eyes
O the rushing calls to thee
then hails thy realize

seagirt thy soon shall be
this inland thy shall forsake
as within resides the whole of thee
in quiet Pacific’s wake




© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-07 08:59 PM


Exquisite!
Maybe your becalming is why my boatman doesn't get here :=)
very nice read.

Sherry

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Logan
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2 posted 2001-07-07 09:00 PM


Ahhh, sooo lovely. You do have your way with words and they flow so well together..very gentle smile
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3 posted 2001-07-07 09:18 PM


the winds whisper tonight. . .

wonderful. . . and. . . it's ready. . .  

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4 posted 2001-07-07 10:51 PM


This is wonderful, Karilea..still and peaceful.  Thank you for touching me with your words.
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5 posted 2001-07-07 10:57 PM



Wow, Karilea, this is one of your best, you have such an elegant way with words in this, I'm in awe   Into my library this goes~

Melissa~

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6 posted 2001-07-09 11:53 AM


Beautiful ...
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