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Senryu - inspired by SEA's Missing You
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Senryu - inspired by SEA's Missing You |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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When saying goodbye Moments of love and friendship Never leave our minds Eventually They will fade away slowly Fragments still remain A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I think even more than fragments remain. This is a beauty. I hope memories are enough, when they have to be. Sandra |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautifully said  I enjoyed these very much |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
nice, and I'm going to agree with catalinamoon |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Catalinamoon, they should cause there will be nothing else to hold on. SEA, thanks dear, loved your poem very much. VAS, thanks for reading Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Titia this is quite lovely, and SEA will be very pleased with the idea that she inspired you to this... |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks Sunshine, she said she did. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful. You should take of the last "s" (remain). |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Interloper, my spelling is not allways right I know, have to see if I can get the English spellcheck working on my computer. I'm afraid I can't change it anymore, one only can the first 24 hours I understand. Thanks for pointing out. I'll watch it more closely. Titia I tried and the 24 hours weren't up yet. A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-09-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your work is so good and improving every day it seems. Please continue to favor us with your work for many years |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks Interloper, I'm growing a bit I think. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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