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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-07-07 04:14 PM




Oenomel

honeyed wine quaffed slow
sets speech free then tongue dost flow
depositing glow

~*~

vocalizing fine
faint of heart transforms sublime
oenomel replies

~*~

enchantment revolves
to dizzying heights then stalls
maddening come morn

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-07 04:24 PM


Liked these, Karilea....thanks.
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2 posted 2001-07-07 04:25 PM


the words sound very nice, but I feel in the dark

is the name to be the name of a being?

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3 posted 2001-07-07 05:20 PM


oh. . . senryu that make me think. . .

I like!!!

wonderful my friend. . .

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4 posted 2001-07-07 06:06 PM


you're drinking enamel???  
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5 posted 2001-07-07 06:20 PM



Yep, I always get
        
in the morning
when having an
oenomel
the night before


Titia



A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100


[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 07-07-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-07-09 07:33 PM


Well, it's Greek to me ...
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7 posted 2001-07-09 07:38 PM


Karilea~
Toasting a little mead with you ~

Cleverly done, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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