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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2001-07-07 12:49 PM



Star Crossed Lovers

Here once again I find myself
In the middle of the night on the shore
I've had another lovely evening with you
Though still I yearn for more
Our love isn't traditional they say
People wouldn't understand you or me
Even you sometimes question
The love I pledge to you for all eternity
As I look up at the neon moon tonight
These are the words I long to say
You are my one and only sweet darling
Together through all this, we shall find our way
The light of our love
Illuminates a path to guide us through
Just please know I honestly with all my heart
Do love you...





AMK
June 29 2001


"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 07-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-07-07 12:53 PM


looks to me like all of your stars are crossed the right way my friend. . .

well done. . .  

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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
2 posted 2001-07-07 12:58 PM


Ahhh Amy/Aim, the stars are shining right in the heavens then. I am very happy for you and your friend..most gentle smile
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
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where the sky and horizon meet
3 posted 2001-07-07 12:59 PM


No one could mistake the love through the words you've shared here.  
Beautiful write,
~Krista

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Marsha
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Maidstone Kent England
4 posted 2001-07-07 04:18 PM


Darling girl wonderful utterly wonderful

I love it utterly outstanding, and your love shines through.
    

Take care
love as always
Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-07-07 07:48 PM


Beautiful tribute to loving. Much appreciated.
Sandra

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