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wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-07-07 12:26 PM

My heart was heavy laden from reading your poem. I do not know your heart Mistik. These are my feelings. I hope they help.

Sweet Poet

Oh sweet poet
Don’t give up hope
She needs you now

God has his arms outreached for you
An angel will greet the one you love

Poet, does your heart
feel somewhat empty now
there is someone waiting
to come comfort you

she left you so that she could die
in a land so foreign to your mind
I would like you to consider this
Our land is foreign to each one of us

sweet poet if you cannot
find her upon this waking plane
don’t believe it's mystical
to offer a prayer of hope

there is one that petitions for your soul
so that your heart and mind will be calm
for when her body lays abandoned
both of you can walk in light.

Love from this corner of the field
Poet my heart breaks for you
She may have but time to live
Let the angel come in peace my friend.

[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 07-07-2001).]

Alwye

Moderator

Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2001-07-07 12:32 PM

I hope he recognizes your sentiments, Walt. Gorgeous gift of words you've given to him here.

*Krista Knutson*

"Touched the mirror, broke the surface of the water,
Saw my true self, all illusions shattered..." ~Tracy Chapman

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2001-07-07 03:25 AM

Walt~
Very nice ... reaching ... touching~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2001-07-07 03:04 PM

Walt,

this is beautiful...you are a wonderful
kind soul know that? im sure Travis will
enjoy your words much.

take care.
amy

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

4 posted 2001-07-07 03:14 PM

Walt you have shown what a wonderful friend really is. Hopefully he will see that there can be a tomorrow.

Mistikman
Senior Member

since 2000-01-10

Posts 682
San Jose, CA, USA

5 posted 2001-07-07 03:38 PM

geeze walt.... yer gonna make me cry over here...

It was wonderful though, and thank you, it really touched me.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-07-07 03:57 PM

this really got to me!

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