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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-07-06 10:51 PM



They say you're leaving
they say you have to go
calling an angel home
I don't want to know

I don't want to hear
the music that they play
I don't want to hear
the prayers that they say

They need you now
they need you there
why don't they know
how much we care?

I don't want these tears
I don't want to cry
I don't know how
to say good-bye


~SEA~

© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-07-06 11:02 PM


quiet comfort found in the knowledge that we all cry with one another
beautiful sincere write Susan
He knows...
me

Martie
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2 posted 2001-07-06 11:04 PM


Sea--You have spoken my own feeling, and many others.  Thank you for posting this.  Hugs!
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3 posted 2001-07-06 11:04 PM


no goodbyes, SEA... "au revoir"...

love ya, Wils.

Sven
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4 posted 2001-07-06 11:51 PM


never good bye. . .

always. . . so long. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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5 posted 2001-07-07 12:02 PM


*HUGS* to you, SEA....beautifully loving tribute to a wonderful man.  

*Krista Knutson*

"Touched the mirror, broke the surface of the water,
Saw my true self, all illusions shattered..." ~Tracy Chapman

Elizabeth
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6 posted 2001-07-07 12:04 PM


None of us want it......but he'll live on forever here.
Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-07-07 08:12 AM


Sea...he would say..."I'll see you on the other side...."
Titia Geertman
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8 posted 2001-07-07 08:49 AM


I don't know how
to say good-bye


you just did SEA and you did it so beautiful

Goodbye is forever
it will take our memories away
So long is just a period
his written words will always stay


Thank you so much SEA for this write that touches my heart as it will do many others

Titia

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Kethry
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9 posted 2001-07-07 04:42 PM


SEA,
He will live on in our hearts.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life.  Patty Hansen.



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10 posted 2001-07-07 05:43 PM


    


Honeybee
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11 posted 2001-07-07 06:27 PM



I don't want to either, Susan, he has been one of my inspirations here too, he is a good man, friend and poet!
Thank you for writing this~

Melissa~

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12 posted 2001-07-08 02:23 AM


He is never gone as long as we hold him up to the light in our hearts...thats where he will live...forever
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13 posted 2001-07-08 02:36 AM


I read this last night but was feeling overwhelmed by the sadness and so did not reply...but I wanted you to know that I read and read, again...and understand exactly what you say here.
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14 posted 2001-07-08 01:37 PM


None of us ever really wants to know do we...

thank you Sea...for sharing

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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15 posted 2001-07-08 01:49 PM


I regret that I didn't know Wil better, having just joined the club, but from what I have read I can truly say that I wish I had had a chance. Yet... I do. I shall read some of his poetry in the archives.
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16 posted 2001-07-08 01:58 PM


another lovely tribute to our good friend bill..he loved it here in Passions, more than i can tell you..

               ~Victoria~

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17 posted 2001-07-08 02:06 PM


Sigh, I don't like goodbye either. Lovely tribute, and let's just say au revoir, as a group. I hope he hears.
Sandra

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18 posted 2001-07-09 03:37 PM



i like it very much ...........
u r writting very good ............
yeh
it is difficult to Good Bye some one ..
u love really ...........
i like these sentence
"I don't want these tears
I don't want to cry
I don't know how
to say good-bye"



Charisma
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19 posted 2001-07-09 04:48 PM


thank you for sharing Sea .....as I feel it the same way.....

((hugs))
Charisma

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20 posted 2001-07-10 10:58 PM


SEA, a wonderful write. There is a big hole in our hearts and its so sad to see his pen is gone.

Parker

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21 posted 2001-07-10 11:06 PM


Sea,
This brought tears to my eyes...My heart aches for those that knew him...I did not have that great priviledge...my heart goes out to you...
Hugs
Cindi

God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears
Cpalmer

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22 posted 2001-07-11 12:37 PM


Susan,

There really isn't a good way of saying goodbye even when we know the time is near.  
This is a tender and honest write.  I'm sure like me, it's much appreciated.  (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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23 posted 2001-07-11 02:07 AM


A very nice appeal.......Very beautiful.
Sunshine is very right .........  

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24 posted 2001-07-11 04:11 AM


your feelings were beautifully written...a wonderful tribute...thanks for sharing..SEA

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

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25 posted 2001-07-11 06:15 AM


Wonderful poem Sea!   It's hard to cover such thoughts and the difficulty of saying good-bye.......well done!!
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