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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-07-06 07:38 PM


I thrive just like a flower
In the garden of your love
I become the brightest star
In your constellation high above

How recklessly I dive
Into your sensual sea
The enormous waves of desire
How they wash right over me

You're my oasis in the desert
Such a welcoming sight you are
I have climbed the peaks of your passion
And wished upon your shooting star

You're the pillow where I lay
After travelling many paths
You and I together have discovered
The finest love to forever last

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-06 08:09 PM


And may all of nature sing your harmony...enjoyed, Sue....
SmittenKitten
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2 posted 2001-07-07 12:52 PM


How recklessly I dive
Into your sensual sea
The enormous waves of desire
How they wash right over me


I love this.  Beautiful imagery!
~Krista

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And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

Logan
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3 posted 2001-07-07 11:22 AM


Nature, love and innerself,,what could be more merging..Such a very nice job, Sue,,loved the read...gentle smile
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4 posted 2001-07-07 05:33 PM


nothing like this. . .

well done. . . a perfect portrait. . .

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Suetang
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5 posted 2001-07-07 10:53 PM


Thank you all for your lovely words, they are always so very much appreciated.
Take care....Sue

Suetang

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