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Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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0 posted 2001-07-06 05:48 PM


Just had to try this on senryus too  , I used some of your titles again


A fisherman's wife
Obsessed with the underground
Seduced by your words

Wandering through the bush
Landscape of Serenety
The hidden valley

Understanding love
The man inside the novel
Interpreting dreams

Admission of love
From him to her memory
Little miracles

One day at Passions
She is showing off I know
At dawn's early light




A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100


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VAS
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1 posted 2001-07-06 05:53 PM


like the experiment I tried several days ago

can't remember the name I gave it or how far back one would have to look  

kind of fun to do, isn't it

Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-07-06 05:59 PM


yes..poetry in the names cascading down the pages.... too clever!!

I enjoyed

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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3 posted 2001-07-07 02:03 PM


An interesting concept for making haiku....
and the titles made a very classic creation as well.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2001-07-07 02:10 PM


Titia,
Nice work, enjoyed

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
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5 posted 2001-07-08 06:58 AM


VAS, yes I like to do those from time to time

Cpat Hair, there's poetry in the titles if you look for it.

Lighthousebob, thank you.

Seymour, thanks for stopping by.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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