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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Sleep weights heavily, my eyes are barely open but still I wait for you. The quiet of the night is my allied. I hear myself breathing. I hear my dog dreaming. But still no sign of you. The moon is my allied, as I wait to see your shadow cast your love on me. My eyes in the night and my solitude accompanied me here. My love is my allied, it keeps me sane when I wait and wait. Until I hear you. Until I see you. Until you touch me. Until I feel your love. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I hear myself breathing. I hear my dog dreaming Isn't it strange how sounds are magnified when you're alone at night? *S* I hope your wait isn't long... I like this. *S* |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
like this..and enjoyed the read!! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
What a wonderful attachment that you have to your love, I hope it all turned out as anticipated. I really liked the part about hearing your dog dream. I don't know if it was intended, but it painted a funny picture in my mind. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one walker. . . it's a wonderful description of love. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
And some nights are longer than others. Sleep well. |
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