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Understanding Dreams...............
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Understanding Dreams............... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I woke up confused yet excited like something special had just happened but I couldn't be sure I started asking questions Maude is his grandmother (now I know) this house...... yellow and white with a garden so big and lots of pretties a child's delight? close to the ocean it had to be..... oh yes, he said the breeze way too? yes, I had been there he asked me to describe the woman I talked with last night tiny petite formal and stern pinched in facial features yet pretty he was amazed I described his great grandmother perfectly........ having only met her in dream ~SEA~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah... I knew there was more..and feel still more behind this write... the event is of import...but the meaning and the connection..how are they woven into this so thatit rips our hearts..and minds to take us where we are on the edge of understanding more??? ( yes I am being pushy) |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is absolutely amazing....what did she have to say? Or did she just stand there, nodding approval at her great-grandchild's choice in a wife....? [This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 07-06-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Are our dreams past or future. Do they giuld us. This wonderful poem takes us there. Your an excelent poet, SEA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there was more.....  she was very interested and determined to show me old bottles, like medicine bottles....and she said she killed someone...( yeah, wild, I know) but she thought she killed this person with syrup of epicak (spelling?)and I told her she didn't, that's supposed to make you throw up.....( although I don't know if it can kill) but I had to keep telling her she hadn't. The bottles, were really important........ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
so look into the depths of all that you remember and having captured the facts... weave for us a tale... one with meaning both in your experience and in the broader world... there is your vehicle.. now where is your fuel??? (laughiNG) |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
nice |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Cool dream, SEA lady. *S* I like this a lot! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan... this is WILD yes....but most awesome. the fact that you not only remember the dream but were able to capture it in words makes it even more so! u are a gifted poetress but perhaps thats not where all your "talents" lie...take care. and keep writing about this!! take care. amy "but i see your true colors, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Sea...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You just dream on girl and tell us all about those dreams for they make beautiful poetry. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love the piece. Keep on eating whatever you are eating just before bed time |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is way too cool. I so have done that and been correct about something that I dreamed. It's a cool experience. I loved this. Sauni Sauni :) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
don't miss the lesson. . . take a look at your life right now. . . what's going on in it?? Is there anything that you can see or think of that might reflect what's been going on in your dreams??? the bottles are important. . . as they represent a storehouse. . . but of what?? emotions? knowledge? this really doesn't share that. . . hmmmmmmmm. . . still working on it. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks everyone, and Sven when you know, let me know ok? All I know was she was trying to tell me something and it had to do with those bottles......( so fustrating) thanks again |
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