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0 posted 2001-07-06 01:22 PM




In dreams she found me
Told me I was just like Maude
(who’s Maude?)
my temperament  matching
that of a woman
I don’t know
we walked in the house
steps I felt
I’d already taken
I knew my way……….
Each piece  of furniture
Carried with it the smell of polish
Lemon clean
Fresh yet aged
Gently
The carpet felt
Like I’d walked on it
A thousand times before
So real to my soles
Or is it my soul?
She told me things
And showed me things
But she didn’t know
…….I didn’t know
She gave me
A memory of his

~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-07-06 01:25 PM


haunting.... to dream it and feel so like it is real or was....

nicely told SEA... perhaps there is more of a story than you think there... why not tell us the rest... ( smiling)



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2 posted 2001-07-06 01:28 PM


Oh yes indeed, what all did she say to you?  This begs of a sequel!  Well done!  And probably the longest from you I've EVER seen.....
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3 posted 2001-07-06 01:32 PM


I'm wanting to get it all out before too much slips away -not easy

the longest huh? too funny...is that good or bad??? LOL I'll try to get more of this amazing dream down  

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4 posted 2001-07-06 01:32 PM


   Well done, Who's Maude? T.V.s queen B. Of coarse I'm just getting to know everyone, but? Well, Sea, you have given an excelent view of dreams.
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5 posted 2001-07-06 01:36 PM


Deja vu all over again?
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6 posted 2001-07-06 07:06 PM


hmmmmmm. . . please share more. . . I'm getting some ideas here. . .

very interesting. . .

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