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Blaec
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0 posted 2001-07-05 11:14 PM



In those moments when you don't know how to comfort me, just reach out your hand and touch my face.

That says so much more than your words.

In those times when my tears fall and you don't understand why, don't question me.

Just wrap your arms around me and hold on tight.

When I'm having a hard time dealing with life, don't give up on me.

Just love me and things will get better.

When I'm being stubborn and refuse to admit that I'm sometimes wrong, remember I'm me.

I can't change who I am.


Kris

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1 posted 2001-07-05 11:31 PM


yes, this is so right   I like this very much!  
Ann
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2 posted 2001-07-06 02:26 AM


great poem   you've pretty much penned what i always thought..sometimes when i feel down and upset, more than words an undestanding touch is all that's really needed......best wishes,

~Ann~


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3 posted 2001-07-06 07:14 PM


words to live by. . .

well done. . . I like the way that it just is there. . . like, "This is me". . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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