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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-07-05 09:24 PM

Flavourful Moon

Cherry pie sky melts
with cotton candy crescent
chartreuse stars swirl dreams
blueberry horizon laughs
awaking mandarin smile
~
Watermelon clouds
cascade seeds of confection
of masterpiece moon
over cocoa-lime ocean
sugar cane waves savour love
~
Meringue mountains sway
with banana cream ribbons
adding dash of shine
and a pinch of fairy dust
moonbeams baked to perfection

By Melissa P. Monette

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-06-2001).]

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-07-05 09:26 PM

mmmmmmmmm. . my favorite Melissa!!

love this one. . . well done. . .

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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-07-05 09:52 PM

Very sensuous in flavor, indeed! Well done Melybee!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-07-05 10:49 PM

Thank you Sven and Karilea - the moon inspired my muse ten fold tonight~

I'm going to dedicate this one to Marge because I know how much she enjoys the moon's magic

[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 07-05-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-07-05 11:54 PM

Melissa~
Ahhhh, girlie ... you took my moon and dressed her up all queenly !

BEAUTIFUL ... and you knew I'd love it.
I do !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-07-06 12:01 PM

Cool!!! I wish I could go there.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-07-06 06:50 AM

Melissa,
Have you turned into a Moonie.....ur,I mean, what a creative way to describe the moon. Your word brush painting has made me hungry, I think I will go get a moon pie! LOL
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2001-07-06 08:16 AM

Neatly done Melissa...loved the "sparkles" at the bottom too...really fit.

jwesley

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-07-06 12:09 PM

Melissa~

Back for a TRIPLE SCOOP ...
Now she is a Dairy Queen moon ...
If only the dish hadn't run away with the spoon ! !

You are SO creative~
And I'm craving a taste of this confectioned delight~

Big *huggers*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

9 posted 2001-07-06 01:17 PM

a yummy moon melissa..enjoyed..

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-07-06 01:20 PM

Sinfully delicious...luscious to the last morsel.

Yummmmmmmmmy!

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

11 posted 2001-07-06 06:22 PM

This is positively deliciously delightful! Miss Honeybee, you outdo yourself everytime! Love, Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

12 posted 2001-07-06 06:26 PM

dang Mel, now I am wanting some cotton candy!!!

I have a sweet tooth the size of Texas!

this is clever and fun

enjoyed this very much

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

13 posted 2001-07-06 06:40 PM

Scrumptious Melissa ... from the "cherry pie sky" to the "merangue mountains" ... an absolute delight! Very well done, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

14 posted 2002-03-24 12:47 PM

(smiles) Wow, this is such a delicious and yummy vision of nature, sweet friend, your beautiful words of sunrise and sunset always delight me! (kiss on cheek) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, this is a dessert of a poem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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