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Never Never Land
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Never Never Land |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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I've been to Never Never Land with magic waters, golden sand. Where cotton candy grew on trees and sweetest love was always free. While visiting, a blue edged moon spoke softly, saying "come back soon" With deeper thought an idea came the moon it seemed, did know my name! In Never Never Land tis so It made it that much worse to go But as I left a shooting star called out to me "do not go far". One long look back, I flew away but I'll be back again one day An end to life's ongoing roam 'cause Never Never Land is home. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A wistful reminder that we should all cling to a child's dream, now and then... well done Cat...well done... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, You've painted every dreamer's vision of Never NeverLand. It's out there somewhere, the longings are too vivid and endearing to cease in its existance. When you find it, take me with you!! Loved this... Love, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
can I come too??  wonderful Sandra. . . a vision of dreams. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sandra You painted a lovely picture with great imagery, I love this! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
There is no place like it when you find it. Wonderful, Sandra.  All writing comes |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
I especially liked the double-entendra of the last line, for you can be "there", or "there" can be in you. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
What a fruitful imagination you have Well done indeed. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Catalinmoon, An ever never beauty. Enjoyed |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes...very nicely told! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely told sandra..enjoyed hon hugs~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice expression catalinamoon...James |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, just lead the way, my lil' sis, and I will follow you there!!! This is like a wonderful flashback into childhood fantasies, and I love it so much!!!!!!!! It's a part of you that I hope comes out more and more, because then we all get to share your special kind of magik!!!!  The road goes on forever, and the stories never end... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Very nice thoughts There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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