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Open Poetry #14

Passion In Thunder

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2001-07-05 10:31 AM

Passion In Thunder
~*~

knocked off my feet
when the thunder rolled
over and over,lightning strikes
in the burst of light
you become my only need
as dreams of summer breeze
turn to passion
when the thunder rolls

BloomingRose

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-07-05 10:33 AM

BloomingRose~
Been listening to a little Garth, have we gal ?

Whatever inspired it .... it's wonderful.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-07-05 10:38 AM

sounds like a moving moment...

enjoyed the read and the images..

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

3 posted 2001-07-05 10:41 AM

Garth, indeed....can inspire anyone! Well done Deb!

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2001-07-05 01:41 PM

Thanks to all. I never listen to Garth music, but believe I will after the comments. Got me curious.

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-05 04:09 PM

Been there before. Lovely feeling, isn't it? And yes, listen to Garth! LOL.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2001-07-05 08:02 PM

wonderful melding of the storms intensity to portray the passions intensity...
great use of imagery Deb...
so nice to see you posting again

take care
jm

We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away,
Like the doors of heaven will swing wide open if we just find the right words to say.
~E. McCain

Mote
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 31

7 posted 2001-07-05 08:28 PM

I love lightening and thunder. Wonderful write.

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

8 posted 2001-07-05 08:46 PM

Lonewolf~ Thanks... and I will *wink*

JM~ Thank you and yes, it's good to be back,
though I will not be online for a few days after Sat.

Mote~ I love a good storm.

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